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Please check out my new track 'BaZ-steppah 45' and post your comments here!!!
some more dubstep orientated stuff
reviews is welcome ; spend two hours on this so far on sucky headphones ; sorry if the mixdown sucks :p
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Greyone
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yo bazmaniac
intro: synth could be fuller , or involve some more ambi. drums sound great when the cutting starts but its like the track leads to nowhere ?
more samples , more fx , more experimentalism , more baz-style 
could be better
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02-09-2006 13:43 |
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dj milkman
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alrite mate.
Just listened to your track its alrite. i like the begining sounds quite dark but it doesnt lead any where and doesnt really build up or anyting just changes slightly then goes back. The drums are good i like but it could be improved a lot.
if i was you i would make it more ambient at the beginig cos it is sorta but needs more. it also needs some direction like a build up then downbeat or something along those lines. i would also add more samples not loads thou but just have something bit extra which makes it stand out more. also get the bass stonger and or change the loop. needs some improvement but is still gud.
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02-09-2006 19:39 |
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equipped
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mighty Baz treat's in full,...shit you know im diggin this beast,..those string's are a great idea but id ither get rid of em or change the sound or even just warp em somehow,..everything els is soundin huuge,..bit to much goin on at times,..maybe strip it down to the dirty gut's when you get more of the track goin,..that bass is thick and needs a few bar's on it's own,..1:28 be a slab n a half,..this tunes soundin huge man,..big fucking tune,..cheers Baz.
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02-09-2006 20:16 |
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baz
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cheerz for the reviews peeps ;
@ greyone ; all u mentioned is true ; like i said ; i made this in two of the most drunk hours of my life 
(an on extremely shitty headphones
) ; advices will be kept in mind 
@ DJ milkman :
kinda the same as i said to greyone ; ur right ; the track does need some proper buidup an indeed doesn't lea anywhere ; the last part actually is nutthin but loop jus to make it a lil longer ; thx for the review
@ equipped ; glad u liked ; i worked out something with those strings already (involving lost of automation ; distortion an modulation)
glad u liked the style i chose ; will deff try an make this a massive dubsteppah !!
cheerz 
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03-09-2006 04:36 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Put some delay on those strings in the intro and they will fill the space a lot better; right now they are too dry and sound a bit off.
I do do like some of your edits, but it doesn't seem to be leading anywhere..
but it's a good start tho. Just figure out what it is you want to do with this, but please, proceed to do it, and dont just let it flounder around aimlessly
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03-09-2006 08:17 |
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baz
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Originally posted by hardplnsdrftr
and dont just let it flounder around aimlessly
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lol
thx for reviewing
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03-09-2006 14:04 |
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03-09-2006 15:46 |
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Originally posted by Scaranja
You certainly know how too drum on FL
Nice drummin
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cheerz bruv'
thx for the positive review
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03-09-2006 17:01 |
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tryptech
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Jeah its not much of a review I know, nut what can I say about this pro stuff, althouh it isnt finished yet everything it has in it is perfect.
Cheers
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03-09-2006 23:44 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Scaranja
Jeah its not much of a review I know |
no prob dude i wasn't commenting on the review ; glad u liked the tune
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04-09-2006 09:33 |
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the drums and the strings in the intro are cool
when the bass comes in it doesnt sound in tune with the string...
but then it sounds alright with the higher string... some made techniques on the bassline... the drums are heaps cool.
keep working it f'sure man
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04-09-2006 16:14 |
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19-09-2006 20:40 |
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baz
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Originally posted by cynik
lol this starts like one of my tunes (that never made it here)
greyone had it spot on. it's great but evolve it more! |
nope ; it sucks an has reached the bin
thx for review tho
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19-09-2006 22:22 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by cynik
lol this starts like one of my tunes (that never made it here)
greyone had it spot on. it's great but evolve it more! |
nope ; it sucks an has reached the bin
thx for review tho
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lol
np. you didnt delete it did ya??
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19-09-2006 22:25 |
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baz
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Originally posted by cynik
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Originally posted by cynik
lol this starts like one of my tunes (that never made it here)
greyone had it spot on. it's great but evolve it more! |
nope ; it sucks an has reached the bin
thx for review tho
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np. you didnt delete it did ya?? |
never delete a tune ; they can be helpfull for constructing new tunes 
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19-09-2006 22:38 |
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TechDiff
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Alright dude. Havent heard this one yet, how the fuck do you do them so quickly?!
Quite slow for you!
Strings at the begining sound nice, a little thin perhaps. Maybe you should fill out the chords a bit. Drums sound ace. A little rigid when they first come in but soon pick up momentum and roll along nicely. Sound nice little tweaksand edits in here. I like the white noise kinda sound. Im not too keen on the clicky kinda synth drum sound, sounds a bit out of place IMO but other than that the drums are cool.
The bass didnt come through much on my speakers. Not sure if thats just the ones Im using or whether its too quiet.
Is this meant to be only 1:40 long? Its definately sounding like a good start to a tune.
The string parts definately need to be thicker, wider chords and wider stereo too.
Has a little bit of a rossz csillag vibe to it.
Nice one, looking forwards to hearing the rest.
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20-09-2006 19:16 |
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chomp
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what a sad intro 
i think whith a cool nice other loop sample it could be nice but will not render the same on transitions...
good experimentation but i don't like this one 
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21-09-2006 20:15 |
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baz
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Nice one, looking forwards to hearing the rest. |
thx but there ain't gin be no next
i seriously dislike this track myself ;
made this one when i was awake for 3 days (for playing a call of duty competition (wich i won
) ) sounded good back then ; sounds shit to me now
deff gon give another shot at thel strings but it'll be a lot harder an faster i think
thx for the review
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21-09-2006 22:50 |
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Nosrac
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Like the big stepping intro and things get really beefy with the extra layer and then the sub. The strings go a little off there though - maybe they should be the one steady thing in the track - going up high is cool though. Some nice edits - classic jungle cuts on the amen (done in reason/audio editor or what?). Not a whole lot of new ideas though, the mix is pretty flat and the extra snare later on is kinda sloppy. Love the badass junglist drums and sub though!
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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