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Philthy McNasty
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Please check out my new track 'Future is Free' and post your comments here!!!
First off this is my first time, at a how do you say "Lolly Pop DnB" style. Please let me know #1 if you like the tune, #2 what I should change, #3 is my EQ'n getting better.
RespecT!
iKoN
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Mmm I like it anyway, youre songs always have something jazzy. Nice breakbeats.
Chill man, Nice track
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19-08-2006 02:23 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Mmm I like it anyway, youre songs always have something jazzy. Nice breakbeats.
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Thanks for the feedback. The the other 35 people who have listened thanks for nothing
I tend to leave feedback on everyones tunes, and it is starting to seem like no one is leaving them for me. LAME~!
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19-08-2006 05:08 |
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nice reverts on drums man
but drums arenot clear than i like, they sounds chocked (in france we say like that) sounds cool, but need more up and down melodic, it's to flat (for me of course).
what do you use as effect over your drums ?
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19-08-2006 05:15 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by chomp
SEE WHAT YOU SEE
nice reverts on drums man
but drums arenot clear than i like, they sounds chocked (in france we say like that) sounds cool, but need more up and down melodic, it's to flat (for me of course).
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the amen was meant to sound choked. I just wanted the kick from it. What effects are you meaning. Filter, Delay, etc. Or cutting and splicing techniques?
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19-08-2006 05:27 |
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chomp
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oh no it's okay, i just wanted to know why the drums sounded like that but if your breakbeat sample is chocked, its normal.
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19-08-2006 05:32 |
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[quote]Originally posted by iKoN
#1 if you like the tune, #2 what I should change, #3 is my EQ'n getting better.
1) It's ok, kinda boring IMO, seemed a lot longer than 5:36
2) I'd fatten up those bass drums and snare drums with some layers to give them a bit more smack. I also dont care for that repetetive organ in the middle of the track, though it sounds nice when the bass kicks in at 3:36I think maybe if switched up the breaks a bit more this might help, add another variation to the Amen u already have going or use a different break.
3) I think this is the biggest prob with your track. Your mix sounds really muddy to me. I think if you add some mid to high frequencies it will make a big difference. I think your low frequency seems ok, though I don't hear the bass enough because of the overall mudiness.
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19-08-2006 07:00 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Originally posted by iKoN
I can take feedback, but this is the only track that the bassline doesnt sound muddy at all, and the amen is supposed to sound choked. And the spliced up sniper is all highs, so I dont see where you are coming from. I listened to this tune, on 5.1's sitting at my desk, on headphones, and on a surround sound on CD, and I am hearing nothing of what you are talking about. Oh well your opinion. Thanks for it
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Thats cool, It sounded a bit muddy on my event TR5s. Your track to sound a lot better to me when I boosted the mid to high frequencies.
Just listen on as many systems as possible, and if they all sound good, it's probably good.
I do think your songs are getting more ambitious and focused, even though I dont think this one is your most successful.
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19-08-2006 07:56 |
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Philthy McNasty
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I can take feedback, but this is the only track that the bassline doesnt sound muddy at all, and the amen is supposed to sound choked. And the spliced up sniper is all highs, so I dont see where you are coming from. I listened to this tune, on 5.1's sitting at my desk, on headphones, and on a surround sound on CD, and I am hearing nothing of what you are talking about. Oh well your opinion. Thanks for it
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Thats cool, It sounded a bit muddy on my event TR5s. Your track to sound a lot better to me when I boosted the mid to high frequencies.
Just listen on as many systems as possible, and if they all sound good, it's probably good.
I do think your songs are getting more ambitious and focused, even though I dont think this one is your most successful. |
Thank you for that
See that is why I stay with the dark stuff. I just heard that girls voice sample, and said I have to make a tune with this, but I knew it was gonna be that Lolly Pop style which is totally not me. I am more of a Dark Junglist. But I had to try. And my next tune is gonna be a really Dark 2 Step tune. I am just trying things out to see were my style should be, and it is leaning for towards the Dark Junglist style.
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19-08-2006 17:23 |
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nice whiplash effect ,..delay that starts at 1:11 is killer,..id make that more upfront in the mix,..your sub is gettin lost too,...bring them more upfront and this is a huge tune,..simple but very effective head nodder.
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19-08-2006 21:11 |
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Philthy McNasty
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20-08-2006 02:49 |
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24-08-2006 20:23 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by N-FETT
Very good Breaks,
climatical production
you have good productions!
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Thanks man....Just now going on a lil over a month into producing....so hopefully I will be the man by the end of the year
RespekT!
iKoN
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24-08-2006 20:29 |
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nice reverb, very digital sounding tho...
drops into what feels like all there is going to be... too much too soon maybe imo???
needs to have more bass presence but i do like the bassline i cn barely hear it but it does sound as if its wobblin about, givin a nice natural feels to it
the occasional vocals over the top of the added amens works well, really nice vibe to this tune but i wonder if it would sound as good as it does if played at a faster speed
gotta go
peace
cheers
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