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playin..
lush vibe..
good delay on the vox mate
sounds as if its gonna get wobbly.. lol
maybe add a string line in this intro part in tune with those strings or pad..
drop - fuckin good imo, although the bass is way too low in volume bro, everything else sounds wicked, real tough driving feel with that heavy ass snare along with some well equed breaks rollin in the backround
like the edit/fills every so often
the structure of this tune is good jus need to boost that bass an a bit of variation on it would be great, compliment it along with another lead, some mid range grimey melody and then the synth would do the drums and percussion justice on this track
hope you decide to keep workin on it, by i know how it is once the original vibe has died when makin a tune
peace jemone
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cynik
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although the bass is way too low in volume bro
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gheh might be my fault cause I told him the bass was too loud in the clip :x
review comin up (as soon as I get the clip)
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cheers glimmers, yeah i agree about the bass, im struggaling to get the right level with it, its bassically a subby type sound, ive compressed it to try and bring the level up but if i bring it up to much its seems to distort , and it distorts the snare too, but that might be my headphones shaking lol, i think ill layer it with another synth so its more audible, yeah my mate cynik had words about the levels of the bass before, but to be fair to you cynik it was a different clip you heard then, its changed a little now, and yes the bass was severe before, so big ups to ya dude, keeping me in check as always.
yeah i was definately gonna be working on more srings on the intro, ive been trying to lay things out to get the track moving, so theres still lots to be done to it yet, all the ideas youve had are definately along the lines i was going with this, so cheers for the reveiws.... cynik ill hit you up laters mate
cheers jem 
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03-05-2006 16:41 |
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track don't work here man, sorry==prolly my bad
will check agian laterzzzzz 
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where is the wobble ???? lol
if you use fruity loops, i can tell you how to simply do a cool wobble bass just with the 3x OSc, like wobble in super sharp shooter or many old tunes....
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03-05-2006 18:03 |
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lol there is no wobble mate, just glim thought there might be one coming cause ive been messing with some wobblyness in previous tracks, but no wobble in this one fella, you could always reveiw the rest of the track though
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03-05-2006 19:13 |
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did this intro get simpler, did you remove some of the srtings or something? could be shorter a few bars
ooh the new drop is cool. I like how the beat slowly gets more saturated.
not too sure if the reverse vocals fit just right, feel kinda bare without them strings
feels like it didnt pick up just yet. might be me, Ive been listening nothing less than 180bpm today
great drummin! loving the swing on the beats with the new ghost snares. they could however be louder IMO, and the snare could have more hiss cause you got a fairly simple and empty kind of vibe, which is not bad at all, I just feel it could use a sharper snare
while that sub is ok by itself I don't feel it does much for the tune. how about using less attack on it and place it maybe more tightly with the kick
as you know I like the vibe in this, I think it's great youre trying all these different versions of this track, this one I like the most
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03-05-2006 21:39 |
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cheers bro, yeah i gotta work on the string sections yet, and ill cut down the intro a bit, im slowly building more upon this now,
yeah the sub is proberly better to be pushed back a bit, and ill throw a square or somthing more growly over the top, hopefully the sub will just give the bottom some weight and the bass groove will be more audible this way,alot more work on this one as of yet, but im feeling posative so far.
check ya g mail cynik bruv, i sent them things, enjoy.
peace jem 
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03-05-2006 22:17 |
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07-05-2006 16:38 |
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Soundin huge man,..love the delay's,..drums sound insane,..fat as all hell,...seems allot of low is goin down on em,..maybe try n crisp up,..maybe not though,..sounds nice n heavy,..conga loop sounds sick,...solid preview Jamone's,..big fuckn masher!
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08-05-2006 15:39 |
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cheers for the reveiw jimmy mate,
thew thing with the breaks is i bounced em with a load of distortion on, thats left em pretty crunchy, but ive found that the bass in the back is dulling the mix, they sound crisper without it, so its somthing im gonna be working on , plus i think im gonna layer the breaks a bit more to like you say brighten em, ive been messing around with sounds for a while, and been into dnb for many years, but producing d and b for about 5 months, so i can be excused for some teething problems lol, but im getting there bro.
cheers mate
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08-05-2006 16:11 |
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cool intro vibe for sure...
i deffintely dig the drop... a lot..
you really need to bring those apaches out more unless that was your intention...(or the myspace player)
mastering needs cleaning, but for the vibe and production strait heads style man.. i dig it for sure.. good work for such a short time producing...
add me up www.myspace.com/djsurora
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09-05-2006 17:25 |
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cheers surora will do man, thanks for the reveiw
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10-05-2006 09:43 |
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5 months and u came up with this 1? bloomin ell!!
love the intro... despite what people say i think its a good lengh purely because there's alot goin on in there...
for the sub all i can say is you need to add another 1 (or the same) in the 1st 2 bars of every 4 bar pattern (if that makes any sense)
drums are cool but not enough top-end for me.
good track tho 8.5/10
keep workin on it btw
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Alright dude. Intro sound really nice, trippy yet warm. vocals sound really nice, cant cant understand a word of it though.
Eh where did it go. oh, here come the hoovers.
Drops in really nice, really storming. Shame about the quality, although I guess it could be the myspace layer, what bitrate did you upload in? Some of the synths are a little messy in the breakdown, seem to clash a bit.
Not much to say really. There are some great ideas, and what is here sound great. The quality is reall bad though, would much prefer to hear a better quality mix before I say too much else. its really difficult to pick up on anything listening to this version.
Great tune so far, kepp us all posted.
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