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review will follow this afternoon 
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baz
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intro sounds nice but kinda weird ; what did u use do them violins ???
everything sounds quite simple before the fat sub bass @ 1:10
after the sample it kicks off lots better ; but then again exept for some nice edits here an there it sounds way too simple because of the drumz
i'd say keep the catchy bassline an ditch the drumz
restructure an give it a propper buildup
btw: there's a synth in there that really makes me think of final fantasy 
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yoeri
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yeah id say a nice buildup would be great to the song
the violins are great, but i dont know about those cello's...or contrabasses (never really knew the difference)
sometimes its also a little bit always the same thing...
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29-03-2006 17:54 |
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chomp
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yes it's the yamaha tx81z hi hi hi.
i like the drums maybe they are to "simple" (no complex breaks) but il like them like that. if you wanna do a remix i'll be ok
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29-03-2006 17:57 |
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Originally posted by yoeri
yeah id say a nice buildup would be great to the song
the violins are great, but i dont know about those cello's...or contrabasses (never really knew the difference)
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it's named "Analog String" on my expander 
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29-03-2006 17:58 |
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baz
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Originally posted by jnf
yes it's the yamaha tx81z hi hi hi.
i like the drums maybe they are to "simple" (no complex breaks) but il like them like that. if you wanna do a remix i'll be ok
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id love to remix it m8
i'll talk to u over msn bout it 
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29-03-2006 18:12 |
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The intro is weird, it's something different which is good, but it needs editing.
The bass wobble is very nice, how do you do that? Any tutorial?
The drumline sounds a bit to flat, it should "bite" a bit more to fit a tune with a wobbly bassline in my opinion. Change the Eq-ing or layer on a snare.
Nice stuff. With some extra work it could become great stuff.
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14-04-2006 23:52 |
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chomp
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thx, for the wobble..... 
it's made with subtractor, sorry but i have no tutorial to give you, just turn knobs and eq-ing ...
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15-04-2006 11:26 |
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Glim
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such a shame those beatz are too soft for the track to feel rollin, the other elements are great luv the bass sample, if you worked on the drums with some variation on them too then it will be a smasher!!
i like the ideas you put into your tunes mate keep rinsin!
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