Glim 
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really like that pad sound..
woah!! loads of stuff goin on here
would say theres alot of highpass in the mix, breaks sound a bit to trebly on ma speakerz
kind've enjoying this strange melody, anticipating a change soon..
DROP::
This is class mate, excellent bass sound, really rollin, the levels now sound alot better
fuck that bass is phat, dominates the track, sounds like some top notch UK jump up imo..
when you bring back in the second original melody, it jus dont sound right after havin the grimey analogue bass
wicked variation on the second drop
this is a wicked track, cant beliive you made it in FL6, i gots it , (wicked program)
gonna be checkin your tunes now if this is anything to go by
Thanks
Glim 
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08-02-2006 16:03 |
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cynik
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beats in the intro could be flowing better. weird sounds follow
drops: not enough power. not too keen of such classic use of classic instruments
main beats don't flow that good either. could use some (more) filling up, layering and eq-ing
what a bassline - wobble in it's purest form. it's too loud, overpowering everything else. gets boring quickly although thats personal tastes speaking
okay I don't really see where youre going with this. weird twist at 2:50, you drop off a lot of sounds only to bring a bunch of different ones too quickly
mixdown could be better too. it's not horrible, but it's got that dreaded sample feel. loads of different quality samples recorded on a vast variety of equipment etc.. you get my point. damn samples
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08-02-2006 16:12 |
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chomp
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yes cynik you are right
the intro beat sounds bad
with the 2:50 step, this passage is not worked enough .... 
I still have job to do.
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08-02-2006 16:38 |
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Fluctuation
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jus downloadin your tune now.. at 11mb it better be good 
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..........hmm subtle intro.. like slow beat.. snare sounds bit wk.. maybe boost eq or diff sample.. like ambience.. and high bits every 8 or so bars?
I like the bit jus b4 the drop...
not sure about this strings/ orcheatral bit.. bit dodgy..
hmmm .needs bass or sub bass... maybe it kick son later...
aha.. there its is.. heavy.... get rid off the strings bit b4 the bass kicks in.. jus drop to bass man.. its heavy.. boom
quiet strings/violin would sound better.. but not at front of tune.. for me anyway.. i like the horn sample... then bass again... HEAVY.... with loopin sample.. man that bass is nice.. could maybe add bit of extra sub bass.. but im bein picky..
love the bass..
drums are ok.. maybe beef up a bit
dont like strings...
keep em comin.. nice tune..
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09-02-2006 02:43 |
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Sensa
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Wow, your the first french producer ive listened to i think!
anyways the track!
Glimmas right, this sounds like some uk jump up, not sure about that cheesy synth on the intro but still it seems to work pretty well.
THE DROP: boooo, i love it, with a proper mix down and bit of sub behind it im sure this could b turned into a top not piece of dancefloor material, very generation dub sounding imo
you say you use FL 6, id be interested in remixing this, so if you care to let me message me and we can work something out.
Peace
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Dj Kemix
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jior le drum n bass musique?
weee!
Nice Work!
Unique Sound!
Cool Style...
Keep it up!!
Ups To You JNF
~Kemix
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10-02-2006 00:45 |
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camo
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Yo jnf!
intro: ok. has no power. is not strong enough. bit boring. make more breaks!
1:07: hello, my name is fruity slicer
hehe
not sure bout this strings. but earlier ive cutted also lots n lots of loops to slice.
stops too emediatly...
funny bassline, like it..but the drums.....bit weak.....like the b-line nice wobble stuff..maybe you should turn up the bpm. i think this might be ....dunno max 170. i produce at 180 mostly. gives jump up more power!
keep it up!!!
cheers!!!
camo!!!!
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10-02-2006 21:53 |
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chomp
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before i produce at 185 BPM, then it has tired me, I am calmer now ...
maybe at the b-line moment i can push the bpm faster, i'll give it a try.
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10-02-2006 21:59 |
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Glim
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Originally posted by jnf
before i produce at 185 BPM, then it has tired me, I am calmer now ...
maybe at the b-line moment i can push the bpm faster, i'll give it a try.
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hmm, changing the overall tempo of a track as it reaches the drop isnt a good thing imo, especially for mixing...
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11-02-2006 21:15 |
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Tenbucc2
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Well Well,
I have to say that I'm definately not feeling this one. It's just a little too much out of my comfort zone but I thought I'd drop some comments cuz there is some really redeeming value to it. Your production is top notch. sounds real good. Your bass reminds me of some proper old school jams. The thing is that the overall feel is just too "UP" for my tastes but that doesn't mean shit...
anyway i like your whole approach to the thing but i just can't get with the happiness. Proper sounds though mate so keep it rollin'
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08-03-2006 02:02 |
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chomp
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08-03-2006 06:59 |
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BeatJunkie
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I like the half-speed intro... nice atmosphere w/ the vocal samples. the horns are a good touch.....the drums sound very familiar. the strings are too happy. imo, but maybe thats how u wanted it. *DROPS*-- I like the B-line man! heheh, i used that same atmosphere u used at 2:47.... in one of my tunes. (from this site if im not mistaken)
overall i liked the samples u used and the Bass line. the tunes not really my vibe but its good. hope i was SOME help. Keep it up.
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13-03-2006 06:24 |
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PassDa J.
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Not found of the speed ... A lil' too slow ...
Like that happy sound there with the break on it, sounds pretty happy french school guy like 
Like that wobbly bassline there, but put a lil' change in that break dude ...
Not really my style, just go faster!
laterzzzz
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13-03-2006 16:02 |
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chomp
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YOOOOOOOOO, Ok !
thx for ya reviews. since this tune, with youre comments, i have increased my average tracks speed, i think in this track, the mistake is in the drums, because i used stylus wich was shifting with the brekbeats in the background... DON'T USE STYLUS + Fruity Loops 6 FOR BEATS 
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