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Hypoxic 
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Please check out my new track 'Tranquilizer' and post your comments here!!!
Made in fl5, most of the samples are
from this site, thanks heaps for the samples!
Still aint what id call finished, so any feedback
at all would be greatly appreciated.
Cheers
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06-02-2006 14:19 |
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camo
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Yo!
intro: nice pad.....bird give it a smooth feeling.......lead is a cool.....not sure bout surrounding basses=more punch needed....1:19: bass bit cheesy
nothing like a drop. 1:30: gets cheesy. fast high not good..too loud....gong is funny.
overall: didnt really enjoy it, im sorry. but keep on producin a lot and you will get betta and betta!!!!!!!!
peace
camo
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06-02-2006 20:25 |
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anf0 D
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yeah the pad and the bird are nice n soothing...
the strange panned bass stabs sound strange i dunno... i was always told bass should be dead centre. cool deep sub is sweet.
i dunno i cant really agree with camo... i quite enjoy this tune...
well the bassline n the synth... still overall it needs abit of work.
the gong is abit funny though.
i dont like the synth that comes in the break down... personal thing... me n that sound just hate each other. lol but after that synth is gone... its into a cool tek steppin groove... ur cymbals are cool although they are too loud... turn them down abit...
there are also cool sound fx in this tune n vocals.
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07-02-2006 04:44 |
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Hypoxic
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Cheers for the feedback fellas,
Wasn't sure bout the main synth, will prob swap it.
The main bass is kinda house(ie:cheese) soundn to hey.
The gong was put there when I was messin about,
and ended up staying.
note taken on no drops, will try work some in.
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07-02-2006 05:26 |
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chomp
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bonne introduction, mais personellement je trouve le synthé très moche à 1:25, il aurait mieux fallu gonfler la b-line ! 
i think that the synth who appears at 1:25 is bad , you sould better punch up the b-line in background....
6/10 for me 
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07-02-2006 23:58 |
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Hypoxic
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glad you liked it man, thanks.
think i will do some more work onit later now,
inspired by some people likin it.
Bass line in background lost abit of its punch in the export.
be careful with the later synth, gets stuck in your head,
even thou it anit all that.
havn't herd Skynet & Stakka Lost In The Jungle, will have to
check it out.
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08-02-2006 05:11 |
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Tenbucc2
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awwww son!
is it me or are the drums a little thin? track is a little funny. i mean it sounds like you mixed three different songs. it's a bit confusing in the middle but when everything drops but the bass and the drums it starts to com back together... but only to end 5 seconds later. I'm not sure about the bird or the pad. I guess it's all about what your aiming for. you got some good concepts but it seems like the way the've been strung together has lost it's focus at points. I would replace some sounds and play with some settings... add some layering on the drums and then take a listen.
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08-03-2006 02:37 |
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Recruit
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Yo what up bro. Respect for your composition. Sounds are out there alil bit. like the bird noise and the bass drop. the bass just seems like listening to someone trainwreck. focus more on your selection of sounds with others and there final arrangement..im sure you come up with something unique yet phat..get at me bro
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08-03-2006 04:23 |
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oplin
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this sounds too much like old school techno from the early 90s imo
, i like those bass hits in the intro alot, but am so let down once the break comes in it needs to be louder and the straight 2 step dosnt seem like the right type of break at all for this song
the ride that comes in at 1:30 is too loud the bass drop at about 1:15 is way too quiet
i do really dig the idea of the gong but i dont it fits the song very well, the paino loop that comes in about half way into the tune once again sounds too much like old school techno for me, but if thats what you were going for, then props
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20-03-2006 08:27 |
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deafo
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Originally posted by oplin
this sounds too much like old school techno from the early 90s imo
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i say screw that, you should go all out and make an old school rave monster. that fing at 2:30 is great maybe have it on the off beat, dub style.
alternatively why not just turn the whole track intro a beutiful melodic fing, carry on the birds and stuff and bring in some lush keys, strings and melodic bass.
all im trying to say is that it is a bit jumbled and i really dont like the very old-shit sounding bass, (reminds me of the copiuos shit dnb white labels i got sent in an ebay wholesale once). give it a clear direction and write a load of melodys based around each other.
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20-03-2006 09:28 |
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Hypoxic
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Yo, this is the old version of this track, new one is down abit.
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22-03-2006 02:25 |
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Wãn Bushi
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liked the intro very much. I Always llike good pads. The main bass riff isnt' my cup of tea, but that's a matter of taste. The strucutre of the song is nice, lots of variations. But I what bother me most is the drum. I dont think you compressed it. It sounds very rythm box sound-a like. No punch at all. Fix that and the song will be much punchier (i think ^^)
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22-03-2006 15:20 |
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Uproot Dj
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very good atmosphere in the intro, i reckon some raindrop samples would sound real nice. The beat needs more variation, maybe a touch more snare as. When it drops it sounds quite flat, and i hate the ride, it gets anoying, a bit shrill on the high end. I like the chorded synth. Not my thing. Needs more work on the mix
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