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Please check out my new track 'wan yi o remix (preview)' and post your comments here!!!

Hi guys!

Here is a little preview of my interpretation of suryas track!

its a bit messy yet, but i just want to know, what u think about it.

need some bad critics to improve itWink

thx

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10-12-2005 21:13
Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male
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cool intro, but the distorted synth is too loud. Tremolo-stuff is cool. The basslines that come in later aren't really where they should imo, don't know how others would feel about them though. Track makes up for it in variation. Nice punch to it.

FX and edits are the best things about this so far.

Hard to review such a short snippet.

Looking good though.

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10-12-2005 21:24 Homepage of Dubrain Hertz
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thx dubrian hertz!
i have just worked some hours on this, so its far from perfectWink

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10-12-2005 21:30
dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male
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The intro synths are something that definetly shouldn't be included in the track imo. Very dynamic, has
a flow, but lacks something important. Finish it Smile

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11-12-2005 15:32
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Drums are definately solid in this track.

The bass progression is a little chaotic but does make up for it in variation as Durbrain says. IMO i would try and find a theme in all the bass 4 bars u have a stick with it to give the track some continuity. Obviously noone likes a track that gets too samey but equally if a track changes all the time then can sound a bit confusing. - the best part about having loads of bass 4 bars in this track is that u have some scorches to choose from.

Solid bass sound btw i forgot to mention.

keep up the good work.

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11-12-2005 16:14
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aight this shits fat
the drop is awesome dude
stabs are fuckin' hard
this shit pure dancefloor material dude
finish it
Bigup

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11-12-2005 20:16 Homepage of baz
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thanx for the reviews guys!!

ill work on it till its finished! for sure!

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12-12-2005 14:27
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it's not half as messy as most of my previews are lol

very dancy, jumpy groove. true clownstep

not much else to say really. nice progress so far Bigup

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25-12-2005 18:33 Homepage of cynik
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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not feelin the intro but the percussion was cooll...

the drop is cool...drumwise... i think the sounds were used...


but i think the melodies were way off ya know...and i dont mean like song wise (matching up to suryas) i mean with those sounds you didnt really fallow a key...they seem like random melodies...

everything else sounds ok i gues... but work on them melodies...

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25-12-2005 20:22
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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cheezy bassline, the distorted one, but i like the randomness of the noizes near the end, that was cool. the distortion on the lead in the intro is appaling

the drop is good though. vocals are good

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when i was listening the intro, i wondered what was going to occur , then it start, combo bass, as you can do it so well...
I do not know if that lasts really two minutes but if it is the true end, it is excellent Big Grin

8/10

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08-02-2006 01:56 Homepage of chomp
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