djakwiez 
Producer
Registration Date: 27-07-2004
Posts: 39
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intro's very nice, maybe process your beats some more,but your chops are real good. now the breakdown , the synth that enters at about 1.30 min is to clean imo maybe ruff it up a whole lot, when your bass kicks in itbecomes a bit to full, maybe try to let the bass drop in 1/8 later.structurewise i would suggest a second break .mix sounds real good maybe compress the bass a bit more, or something it's sounding a bit like it's puching the beats away (i'm listening on my headphones ,take this into count)
i do like the concept but overall you kinda lost me at about 3-4 minutes i think a second break would help that coz i like the slight variations in the track like the synth thing coming in at the end .
hope this review helps
you can turn this into a real killer.
do your exams and remix this one afterwards i would say
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