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Lizziekah
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Awesome track hunni !!
Really loved the edits, the speech, reece, trancy synth, ...
Nice theme too.. I really got in the mood.
I felt like grabbing a gun lol
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29-11-2005 18:29 |
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Dubrain Hertz 
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The intro is very nice, gloomy and with a very memorable speech. Full Metal Jacket?
drums and bass coming in....AWESOME! I'm usually not too fond of that kind of trancy melody but in combination with that speech it's just fantastic, kinda cheesy but still...
Drums are very cool throughout, gets a bit monotonous underway. You should really add some variation somewhere, maybe a break and then transposing the whole thing or something.
Sure is catchy though 
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29-11-2005 18:55 |
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Soi
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COPYRIGHTED SAMPLES???
Deep bass is nice, melodies are simple but effective
Vocal sample too repetitive, i knew it by hard when tune ended... Maybe add some edits to it.
Melodies and drumline go well together ==> tight rythmic block
Kick slightly too soft, could use more punch (250 hz + somewhere in between 1k and 2k hz)
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29-11-2005 18:56 |
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Surya
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Please send a PM to an admin the next time you upload a newer version of a tune, so we can delete the old one.
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29-11-2005 21:10 |
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Surya
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First thoughts: the vocals don't bled with the track, they're just layered over them!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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29-11-2005 21:12 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Surya
Please send a PM to an admin the next time you upload a newer version of a tune, so we can delete the old one. |
I effing did.
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30-11-2005 12:08 |
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Surya
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Nope, I did not 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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30-11-2005 12:15 |
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Rudeone
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cut out that vocal. this is pretty annoyin. gosh cant really concentrate on the track... cuz it acctually is kinda nice. the bass layer is cool but some modulation wouldnt be wrong. the lead synths sound pretty unedited and boring. try to remake it. gosh that vocal sux
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01-12-2005 11:35 |
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Rude
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soooo uncool.
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01-12-2005 16:02 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
soooo uncool. |
Well, if that is what he REALLY felt, it's not uncool. But it does seem a tad extreme to me...
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01-12-2005 17:09 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by Rude
post your mothafuckin' comments here!!! unless they are negative that is.
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no negative comments? how the hell youre gonna improve??? I will ignore that comment anyway 
cool intro, can't feel the military samples at all though
drops: very good, nice feel. you have improved immensely since the last time I heard your work
reece bassline is a bit straightforward, sequencing could use some swing or something. don't feel it bite as it should either, boost the low end and cut a bit of the high
don't like the high synth line at all, did you make them out of some organ samples?
vocal overuse. I would cut the speech up and insert some assorted bits here n there, mostly in the buildups. youve got that friggin sergeant talking through the whole track - way too much IMO
beats could be a lot punchier. it feels as if theyre pitched up now. you may gain more punch by simply down pitching them. but I would suggest more EQ-ing as well. nice programming though. whats this "homemade beats"? means theyre not a loop?
not bad overall, but nothing special in any way
6/10
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01-12-2005 18:21 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by cynik
whats this "homemade beats"? means theyre not a loop? |
It means they're made out of one-shot samples. And yea not a loop.
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01-12-2005 18:27 |
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coddy
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this intro take me to the ocean.
that is a nice smooth transition into the first drop very good spatial feel. lose the vocal tho when you drop for the first time. it just dosent fit and it is being repeated for no reason.
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