Well what can I say. This is great. Good drums, good mixed, good soundquallity. You could make a better arrangement of the tune. It feels a bit long. Maybe add a different part. The sound is a little bit to bright I think. It's good to have bright sound but you should be careful so that peaple won't get hurt in their ears at higher volumes.
Now I would have been nice if you listen to my tune:
very nice synths , nice structure and a nice first drop but after the drop the snare is to hard in the mix imo. And it wouldn't hurt to put some more variation in the beat aswell. i would also double the little break at around 3.20min .2nd drop ,drops the same as the first one, i would change that aswell, and again snare a bit to loud after the drop.
overall a very nice one soundscapingwise but it lacks a bit in the breaks for my taste. I really like the kind of sounds your creating and the overall sound and flow of the track .
looking forward to hearing more of you.
and indeed like abnormalbrain said try some delay on the vocal could turn out very nice .
Thanks for the comments guys, glad ur liking the track.
I did some serious comparisons of this song to early versions and the high end is definately a tag too high, whacked some delay on the voice as well, it was craving out for some, but sometimes when u work on a song too much u cant listen to it objectively anymore
opens with some nice keys and pitch bends, the beat is a bit stuck, but the sweeps are a nice touch. quick into the breakdown. very good for mixing ... the kick drum rush a bit predictable, good subs, kick and snare both need more punch. lovin the keys, lovin the fx, the vox work, all makin some good soul. need more than freq washes for that beat though. needs fills and rolls if youre stickin with the indy break.
change the drum kit in chapter 3 and space out the ambience more. pretend you're gettin it ready for another track to come in.
All in all, good track, can't wait for the 'DNB.BE.VIP' :^)