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 DJWitch - at the end of the night, spell your fate  |
DJWitch 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'at the end of the night, spell your fate' and post your comments here!!!
here you go guys a little re arrangement and all is well....BLESSED BE for all the feedback...
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BLESSED BE TO ALL CREATORS AND LOVERS AND PURVEYORS OF TRUE DRUM AND BASS, PUT FORTH YOUR PASSION AND REASONING AND RAISE YOUR HANDS TO SPACE, DWELL ON THE BEAUTY OF THE MUSIC AND REVELL IN ITS GRACE, SO MOTE IT BE!!..... 
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15-08-2005 18:07 |
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davieb1
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Registration Date: 04-08-2005
Posts: 28
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Like the start of the inro but drags on bit too much, drops quite weak need a bit more variation. Dont like the beat after the drop doesnt have enough feel. Also the main riffs could be a bit more complicated and the track doesnt seem to go anywhere seems like one big intro. Geting there il look out for your next one . - MINT
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16-08-2005 00:50 |
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vel
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Registration Date: 08-08-2005
Posts: 46
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you know what i like this tune (diffrent) it still needs alot of work
i like that bit from 2:50 what you do with them jungle drums, remember put some sudden changes in the tune and make the tune pound.
nice work
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Punch Bass ......
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16-08-2005 02:01 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
Posts: 1,196
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mmmm drums and percs are nice...
there is funk all bass in this ??? if there is i cant notice it.
the tune progresses nicely for prog... but for drum n bass i dont its that exciting. there are no obvious change ups or drops.
drums are nice.
6/10 because not much happens... just little drum changes.
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16-08-2005 02:14 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Nice drums.
Bass needs quite a boost, you can't hear it. The small parts sub are too loud though, they make everything clip!
Dunno. not bad, excenpt for the lack of bass, but I didn't find this track intresting at all... Just goes on and on a bit...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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16-08-2005 11:19 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Registration Date: 21-06-2005
Posts: 150
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Wow.
I like this tune. First of all, out of those 10 tracks today, youre the only one with something else than full bandwith bass line and distorted drums. Production-wise, it is not perfect, but melody-wise youre only one with evolving functional backing to your beats. actually, I used you as a good example on how to avoid the feeling of repetitiveness in song, despite beats being simple. Find the thread from here:
Repetitiveness
what you could try to work with is the production. Try these tricks:
get your favourite set of songs in same genre than this. Upload them to stereo tracks in your favourite sequencer, along with your tune. Mute all except one, do a comparison session. Analytically compare other tracks to yours. Write notes. You will notice stuff, like frequency-wise stuff is a bit out of place, bass needs more bottom, more aggressive beats at second half of the song need work and so on. That work sucks, because youre pinpointing your faults. but youre going into right direction!
Try listening your tune in different loudspeakers and rooms. harrass your friends, mom, music shops with monitor loudspeakers.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by GreatFisherCat: 20-08-2005 21:19.
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