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teknyne 
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Please check out my new track 'HARDCORE HELL (50% COMPLETE) ISH' and post your comments here!!!
GETTIN THERE WITH THIS ONE NOW. WOULD BE NICE TO GET IT SOMETHING LIKE FOR SAT SO I CAN PLAY IT OUT. DUNNO THOUGH. :-)
Edit by Surya: New version here
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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04-08-2005 00:24 |
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Bobby Dangerous
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Thats hard.
Maybe bring the bass up a little but it's pretty sweet man i like it.
Not really what i would play but i love all jungle.
Good stuff man.
Big ups.
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04-08-2005 00:40 |
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baz
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love the progress in this one
dig the fx you added since the last edit
stilll think some of the snare-rolls could be a bit more flowing
anyway, keep workin on this one it's sure to be one of yer best for now
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04-08-2005 03:27 |
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anf0 D
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this is cool.
key changes are nice n 'ardcoreish
choice in sounds is nice... fit well together...
bass could be abit higher in volume, maybe.
nice drum edits and shit.
vox sampls are alright
arrangment n production is tight.
good shit mate... keep it up
8/10
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04-08-2005 04:17 |
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PEAHEAD
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yeah m8 this track is reali progressing. i reali do like this now nice complex work with the drums. the fx are also nice they jus add that spacey touch.ruff bass lines but they could do whit bein a lil louder
nice change of bass good vocal samples. as i say again them drums are nice man. it kinda reminds me of bounty killa crossed with pendlum or sumfin man wel neways i wil give my final review when it has been finished.. PEACE FOR NOW
ohhhh and it goes again propa ruff man i like it
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04-08-2005 15:04 |
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davieb1
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Love the beats, tis what makes the track with this one , but i think a better melody is needed something to give it a bit more flow like, apart from that not bad like , keep it up
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04-08-2005 18:00 |
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Rude bwoy track, feeling the evil in this one, your drums sound tight bro. cant wait to here the whole thing, keep up the good work!!!!!!
Klass
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04-08-2005 18:00 |
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mcgp
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hehe, me likes the roughness
nice track,
the first break really scared me ( wich is good )
maybe bring up the bass volume a little
some of the snare rolls in the first part can be a little snappyer
nice sound FX/ vocal stuff
keep up the good work!!
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04-08-2005 20:16 |
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dubcupboard
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Nice Work Man!
Nice intro sound with the tremolo fx - tight.
drum chops are good but just one little hit is off the mark, only a minor fault
The vox is bang on mentions the title and all, sounds a bit like krs-one!
I like the concept its proper hardcore flava but the amens are rinsed thru out
its not a put down but was hopin to hear some other drum sounds being used.
apart from that not a bad effort full marks 4 concept delivery
maybe some change ups might take this to the next level production wise.
Later
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05-08-2005 00:41 |
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Falkon
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That's a hot track man. I loved it.
Need some better speakers to get the full scope of things though.
And it's only half done. Jeez. 
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05-08-2005 03:43 |
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optikal_assassin
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werd, this track for only 50% complete is pretty tight man. serious display of ill ass breaking. i'm not gonna be critical on the sound quality cuz it don't sound that bad to my ears man. now i think all it needs is a nice dirty ass crunchy bassline and this shit would be serious rippin'. btw, my memory is kinda sucky sometimes, but was it you that posted up a demo of something like this before? i just remember the samples and mad ass cutz. but seriously man, i'm seriously waiting for this one to hit the finished line, cuz it's coming along quite nicely. big ups man.
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05-08-2005 04:50 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by dubcupboard
Nice Work Man!
Nice intro sound with the tremolo fx - tight.
drum chops are good but just one little hit is off the mark, only a minor fault
The vox is bang on mentions the title and all, sounds a bit like krs-one!
I like the concept its proper hardcore flava but the amens are rinsed thru out
its not a put down but was hopin to hear some other drum sounds being used.
apart from that not a bad effort full marks 4 concept delivery
maybe some change ups might take this to the next level production wise.
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yea i agree, gonna try to work another kit into it, layer it with the amens n stuff. just tryin to get the right sound still, have toyed around with other kits but havnt managed to get any of them to fit yet. gonna tidy up the drums too, after peepl have mentioned it i'm really starting to notice the bits that dont really work.
biggups to evry1 for your comments. hopefully have the finished article up in a week or so.
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05-08-2005 18:06 |
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evzone
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liking this shizzle
the drum edits are killer, sounds good 
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06-08-2005 03:17 |
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equipped
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Nice work man! Once again that drop is pure power!! Totally dig all the churning sound's used! Really enjoyable listening! "Dam" this pack's a punch!! Just get's better and better and better! Bring's on a feeling of pure evil! Well done Tekynyner's, you've got a wild bore on your hand's!!
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06-08-2005 23:58 |
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Daffy dub
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Wooow
Love it when the drum makes you feel like you're bouncing off the walls, though I don't like hardcore... So that's a bit less, but I guess that with a songtitle like that you couldn't do without the 'gabber bassdrums''and in this case it's quite breakcore- like...
The thing is: I adore those Amen edits, they're exactly in place and they tell me a beautiful consistent story of utter mental sickness, which just fits me (actually it reminds me of a recent Evol Intent release in that, but this is still a bit more sickness in the drums, the sound is exactly the same), but where it goes a bit wrong is in the synth sounds, a bit to trancey to my likes... and I also miss a good subbass and heavy bassline in general... The bass used just aren't enough...
So please, concentrate the rest of the 50% on finding a Good Sub to go along. I wanna feel my bowels getting the same sick and destructive treatment as the nerves in my head are getting...
But LOVE your sicknessss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This one has lots of potential.. it's a strange and curious drug. Might, when finished, make me crawl around on the floor, eyes all red and crazed, and, inbetween two sessions of trying to get out my stomach thru my mouth, you might find me mourning "Utter destruction, utter destruction" with a gravelike voice, while bangin' my head to the floor. Any of you who should assist to such behaviour, do not come closer, just turn of the tune, and wait 'till the effects wear off.... I like those moments... Makes me feel I'm alive..
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07-08-2005 19:45 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by Daffy dub
Wooow
Love it when the drum makes you feel like you're bouncing off the walls, though I don't like hardcore... So that's a bit less, but I guess that with a songtitle like that you couldn't do without the 'gabber bassdrums''and in this case it's quite breakcore- like...
The thing is: I adore those Amen edits, they're exactly in place and they tell me a beautiful consistent story of utter mental sickness, which just fits me (actually it reminds me of a recent Evol Intent release in that, but this is still a bit more sickness in the drums, the sound is exactly the same), but where it goes a bit wrong is in the synth sounds, a bit to trancey to my likes... and I also miss a good subbass and heavy bassline in general... The bass used just aren't enough...
So please, concentrate the rest of the 50% on finding a Good Sub to go along. I wanna feel my bowels getting the same sick and destructive treatment as the nerves in my head are getting...
But LOVE your sicknessss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This one has lots of potential.. it's a strange and curious drug. Might, when finished, make me crawl around on the floor, eyes all red and crazed, and, inbetween two sessions of trying to get out my stomach thru my mouth, you might find me mourning "Utter destruction, utter destruction" with a gravelike voice, while bangin' my head to the floor. Any of you who should assist to such behaviour, do not come closer, just turn of the tune, and wait 'till the effects wear off.... I like those moments... Makes me feel I'm alive..
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lol!!!!! ur a nutbar mate!!! some valid points tho methinks, will take each n every one of ur twisted wprds into account when polishing this 1 up
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08-08-2005 17:11 |
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Muad'Dib
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Luv the atmo...
wow, what a jungle break!! I like this a lot.
The buildup rocks, it touches the atmo juz like it should.. juz like in some tech itch tune... wow!
Wow I like this break - this reminds me on Pressure Drop from Technical Itch - dark and heavy!
This is good, though you need to work on some clearness on the drums - they miss high freqs.. Its rather the whole tune misses them. Try fixing that.
Wow, I like these combinations of the amen break... but the AMEN GETS BORING, so please use it less...
Anyway, kool tune, I like it.
8/10
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