 teknyne - HARDCORE HELL (THE FLOORFILLA) FINAL |
teknyne 
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Please check out my new track 'HARDCORE HELL (THE FLOORFILLA) FINAL' and post your comments here!!!
HERES THE FINAL VERSION OF THE TUNE I HAD UP A COUPLA WEEKS AGO. WENT DOWN WELL WHEN I PLAYED IT OUT BUT THAT MAY JUST HAVE BEEN DUE TO THE EAR BURSTING VOLUME IT WAS PLAYED AT. ALL TIPS APPRECIATED! I WANNA LEARN
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18-08-2005 19:20 |
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optikal_assassin
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damn, sick tune man. you got alot of good ideas in here. dem floorfilla tracks are pretty damn tight man. i'm a sucker for sick ass vocal work. i think vocals can add a whole new dimension to a track. damn, the only thing that really let me down tho is a better low end sound. i think you could have added more bottom end to the bassline to give it a bit more feel to it and maybe bring the upper frequencies of the bassline to the front lines a little more. seems it got a little lost in the mix of the drums. seriously tight track tho man, definitely enjoyed it. hell, actually, i'd say if you plan on doing at least one more version and fix up somethings, i'd love to add this to my 'ardcore collection. good shit. 
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18-08-2005 20:41 |
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teknyne
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yea i was having trouble with the bass defo. thanks for feedback. if any1s interested i could possibly sort out a sample pack. would love to hear a remix of one of my tracks
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18-08-2005 20:43 |
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Politix
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yo,
good intro nice pads. i'd liked to hear a bit more low end on them tho. Beat got me by surprise!(not a bad thing!). But considering that there are only drums on it i'd definatly add some low end. The actual bass is great...really powerful but it drowns the kick out a bit. i don't like the second bass line or the beat that acompanies it tho(it gets better tho)...the third theme is cool and i like the vocalsmp. the song gets a bit repetitive at the five minuit mark.
overall...a song with attitude...8/10
thanks for the listen
Politix
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18-08-2005 20:49 |
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by teknyne
yea i was having trouble with the bass defo. thanks for feedback. if any1s interested i could possibly sort out a sample pack. would love to hear a remix of one of my tracks
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shit, that'd be great man, i'd love to take my own spin on this one. if you do something like that man, hit me up.
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18-08-2005 20:58 |
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teknyne
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cool, ive added u on my msn mate, will hit u up soon with a sample pack
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18-08-2005 20:59 |
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optikal_assassin
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18-08-2005 21:01 |
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equipped
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Right on man that drop is unreal! This track should be called "The Big Drop"!! This will work allot better with a big system now that u turned thing's down a bit. 
Will be keepin an ear out for Optic's remix, shure it will be absolute phatness! 
Like the delayed outro. Don't really dig the sound used at the intro, maybe mess around with a heavier sound to layer with it. Hardcore vocal's remind me of some video old game? No clue what game. Mad dealey's on the vocal's at 4:11 to 4:37!! Was just about to suggest this. 
Agree that some lowend is needed. Great work Tekynyners! 
Cheers fo d candy mun! 
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18-08-2005 21:54 |
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Darkside
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intro is kinda cheesy synth, not much atmosphere. improve on that quick.
i like the cuts on your amen. seems not loud enough tho. sorta.
altho this track just feels empty.
the drop improves on this, i gotta admit. it's much more full now.
it's a lil better now.
can hardly hear the upper frequencies of the bassline, like optic said, and that's kinda weird.
gets pretty old after a while. but thats dnb.
very much appreciating the amount of work you must have put into this, nice. i'd love to see this amount of effort from some of the other producers on the site.
ehh, the crash on the outro, i'm tired of that effing crash sample
anyway pretty good man
8/10
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19-08-2005 03:08 |
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anf0 D
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hehe im one of those lazy producers that doesnt put much effort into it. i will wen my set up is gold. anyhhooo
yeah the intro sound is alright, not the best, has that hardcore sound about it though... the vocal sample is alright...
nice edits indeed on the amen... although i really am sick of firefight amen style beats, although they are tough.
i like the drop, very interesting. and yeah the bass needs abit more high end.
the arrangment is alright, gets abit samey... but my tunes are fairly samey lol. drum edits are prolly the best thing this tune has goin for it.
and i like the end of the tune. with finger on the trigger dely.
nice tune man, thought out fairly well. nice drum edits and some interesting arrangment.
keep up the good work tek9
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19-08-2005 04:20 |
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Surya
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Nice edits on the drums
Quite good use of the vocal, if a tad overused imo
Bassline needs a boost in the low-end though, the track doesn't sound full.
The arpish shith isn't really my thing and gives the track a very noisy and crowded feel. If that is what you wanted, you got it 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-08-2005 10:41 |
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Greyone
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Hardcore hell ... gonna check it out.
nice tripsounds ... , not a big fan of the reverse ... Ah another drumEditor ! Welcome to my world.
Your style of dnb is like comparable with mine , Buildups where realy hardcore stylish...
But doesn't really drop :
--> Use a short break with no sounds , then when it drops make shure there's a decent sub in it ( or boost it) ,
I allso didn't heard so many basslines in it... put some mid basses , or reeces and a sub in...
Track gets really wicked ,love it , but bring the dnb more in the front (drums become mo hardcore than dnb)
+ get some longer breakdowns .
Nice style teknyne .
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