anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track 'bah fkn fk' and post your comments here!!!
ummm some more darkish stuff
its hardly finished.
but im just trying something new with the drums...
but i cant get them sounding that nice n clear.
tell me what you think.
Edit by Surya: New version here
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PEAHEAD
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wel i dnt reali know aboput tht its quite strange i think is it just a collection of samples. the synths ads a nice effect reminds me of old skool dnb. synth.
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wel i dnt reali know aboput tht its quite strange i think is it just a collection of samples. the synths ads a nice effect reminds me of old skool dnb. synth. |
what a lame review man 
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anf0 D
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teknyne
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like the intro, reminds me of this dj crystyl tune ive got. i think in general the levels could do with sortin but i see you were already aware of this when posting 
bass line is really cool my kinda thing defo, just needs more presence. all the separate bits work nicely together, look forward to final version 
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by anf0 D
Please check out my new track 'bah fkn fk' and post your comments here!!!
ummm some more darkish stuff
its hardly finished.
but im just trying something new with the drums...
but i cant get them sounding that nice n clear.
tell me what you think. |
Not a bad start. Nice break edits man. I think the breaks are the strongest point. You mentioned above about getting the breaks sounding nice and clear. I think alot of that may be due to the samples you used. If your samples are bad to start with, it may be damn near impossible to get them to sound perfect. I've had that same problem in the past with firefight breaks. I tried like hell to get them to sound clear and snappy but the break I cut up sounded like shit to begin with. I think that's an obvious thing tho and not trying to insult your intelligence. I just think if clarity is a real important thing, then start with a better sample. For me, clarity is not always a huge thing since I like a dirty sound anyways. But the track's comin' along nicely man. Kinda weird with them ping-pong effect delays on the amens, but it's different. Don't wanna drag on too much with this since I'm sure alot of the things I'd say would be extremely obvious anyways. Keep it real man.
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04-08-2005 18:43 |
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anf0 D
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Surya
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Wow, hear them delays go 
Mastering needs some work, all you hear is the tramenz blazing.
Bassline seems nice, but it needs a boost since I can't hear it...
Tramen could use some more crispness...
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05-08-2005 16:32 |
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equipped
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Wow dude, this is some angry shit!! Woooooo-weeeee!! Yeeee-haaa!! 
Hot-dog, nice work creating such a soulfull track!! As you can see everyone seemed to feel the beast in this one, big-up on creating such an agressive build-up to the drop and ofcourse the drop itself was sick 
! I must say that the bass is way too low but for what I could hear it sounded phat man. Yeah man, will totally be lookin out for finished version of "Bah Fkn Fk". Cheers man!
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Daffy dub
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Amen, again,
Really like the breaks and the general sound, but the tune drops only about 45 seconds before it ends, so you'll still have to work it to finish it.
As Surya said, bass should stick out more, as should the basskick... layer it.. do the same with the snares.. Find yourself a real bad ass sounding kick and a real snatchy snare and put them on top of the existing ones...
Or, another method might be: just take three copies of the drumtrack, one you leave as it is now, the other two you filter, twitch and equalise to emphasize the basskick with the first, and the snare with the other... And REALLY focus on that sound which you want to enhance, make it hurt your ears...
This way, the middle track (which you don't alter) keeps filling up the sound, while the other two make the kick and snare come out properly...
Since they're all playing the same sequence, this should give you a tight and clean sounding drum.
But certainly keep working on this one, I like it a lot (certainly the last 45 seconds
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Daffy dub: 05-08-2005 21:37.
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05-08-2005 21:36 |
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Surya
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New version here
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