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anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track 'Non Existent [bah fkn fk update]' and post your comments here!!!
128kbps
heavyness
reece bassline... blah blah updated..
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08-08-2005 02:57 |
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optikal_assassin
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damn right heavyness. actually i remember peeping the other version of this you had up and I can hear a difference in shit already. seems like you got more ass in them breaks. Man, only thing I can really say right now is maybe them reeces need more ass too. Seems like the breaks are too loud compared to the rest. I was cranking that shit up at the drop waitin' for the waves through the ears man, but the bass just didn't hit hard enough man. Maybe that wasn't your intention tho, either way this is serious heavy shit. BTW, is this finished yet or you looking to do more to it? Either way, solid as hell in my book bro. 
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08-08-2005 09:31 |
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Daffy dub
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Well, actually, I have to agree with Optikassassin here. You did a fine job on the drums, though they could still come out more... But the bass is still lacking a bit... Keep on working!
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08-08-2005 13:13 |
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Greyone
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Intro could be more original , amens all the way ... pad is very nice.
Drop is heavy but drums could be filterd at 300Hz , levels of drums 'n bass is not correct , put the bass more in the front.
Maybe some more effects ?
2nd drop is damn good , aldough some more cutting in the amens could be more atractive.
This is a very nice track , but it just don't sound finished , work on it a little mo' and it'll be a killer.
Greetz
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08-08-2005 14:46 |
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equipped
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08-08-2005 20:37 |
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baz
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intro to my opnion still needs a whole remake
but when it drops at 0:42
great work cutting those breakz
bassline could be louder
subs could be welcome to 
anyway great progress keepin workin on this one it'll be a great tune
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08-08-2005 22:33 |
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anf0 D
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thanx for all your input guys...
ill see if i can fix ze drums abit, from what people have said, and also turn up da bass to give the drops more POWER! and fix the levels if they are wrong greyone...
but yeah looking from the reviews i wouldnt say this is finished yet.
cheers guys.
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09-08-2005 00:47 |
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Lightningflash
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every thing I would have suggested has been said already. I like this sort of franc stuff but I feel though that it is not good to go on to long with a barrage of sound. I would like to get a good listen to the bass on this track for about 4 or 6 bars, possibly with a H Hat in the back ground and then suddenly back into the full force of it.
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09-08-2005 21:38 |
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Muad'Dib
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Nice begining, though little too abrupt...
I like the strings... the begining gets a little boring though...
ahhh, here is the break.. this first break is great! It takes too long, though... I think you should drop the bassline a little faster. Nice buildup, and bass is good, but little quiet. You should add a bit presence to it. Try adding to the mid frequencies...
but watch that doesn't cover the snare.
Wow, that abrupt break of the beat, strings come in, and then attack - wow, that rulez!
As I said before, I am sick and tired of the amen break and its variations, so I force people to use their snares and kicks. I tell you that too.
The middle part of the tune works great, but the tune gets boring because its the same. You don't have another buildup, which will work miracles in this situation.
My suggestion: add some strings in the second part of the tune to make it less interesting.
Another tip: add strings that will comply with the bass line (similar notes).
The tune gets really boring in the second part, which is to be expected because you use the same (good) break all over. Try variations. You have a good draft for a jungle beat, so use it.
This is kinda dnb jungle beat.
There, I hope you're satisfied. peace
Rate: 6/10
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10-08-2005 15:28 |
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anf0 D
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10-08-2005 15:34 |
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PassDa J.
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Man you're producing like crazy man, haven't you got anything else to do?
Hmmm I always liked you're songs but this one I don't like, the drums are way to chopped up, the synth isn't that cool, not feeling this one anfo, I liked all the others except this one, can't always be good huh 
6/10 voila
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11-08-2005 14:15 |
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anf0 D
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yeah man at the moment i dont have much work, and during the day if i dont sleep, ill sit at the computer n churn some crap out lol
thanx for checkn it out n being honest 
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12-08-2005 00:45 |
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MagNeto
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Good track
Wery iNspirative 
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15-08-2005 10:56 |
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heavy tune, just twist up the tune abit more, make it diffrent in places
nice work
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16-08-2005 00:14 |
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anf0 D
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16-08-2005 01:04 |
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Surya
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Imo there's too much reverb on the tramenz or something.
Some nice edits.
Very compressed again, the volum droppes A LOT when the beats and bass kick in!
Not bad, but you've made better things. Thisone gets a bit boring towards the end. I guess your themes aren't that intresting as in some of your other tracks...
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21-08-2005 18:45 |
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Surya
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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