Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Greyveyard' and post your comments here!!!
HARDSTEP!!!!!!!!
Worked a whole day on it.
No vocals this time.
One of my best till now.
I'm happy with the result.
Let me know what you think about it.
Edit by Surya: New version here
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22-07-2005 00:09 |
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intro nice n' chill (nice high pass on thos drumz)
fat drop at 0:44 awesome roll-in
fat bassline , tight drumz
2:08 strange thing goin on here with the beat slowin down, fadin out
monotone bass an...kick it
it works for me
great track agree it's yer finest for now 
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22-07-2005 00:19 |
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Right on Greyone, this is an effin good tune man!
Lovin the style all the way. Nice vicious track, takin no prisoner's..That bass is out of control, this is a work of art man. You know where it's at!! Cheers. ++Stu Maggoo++
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22-07-2005 06:40 |
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Nick ZZ
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22-07-2005 10:03 |
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bass is to loud...drums to quiet......filters sound ok.
but then when it drops the sub is non existent.........
its literally just drum and bass..no atmosphere and no vibe.
but the b line is catrchy.....
give it a proper intro.....
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22-07-2005 12:40 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
but then when it drops the sub is non existent.........
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My speakers (as you can see in my avatar) can only produce from
80-20.000Hz
So in fact i never heard a sub.
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22-07-2005 12:53 |
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Originally posted by greyone
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
but then when it drops the sub is non existent.........
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My speakers (as you can see in my avatar) can only produce from
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lol. yeh that will do it....but there is sub..cause its heavy at the intro....but then youve filtered (i think!) that noise into the lead sound as it progresses. and because its heavy at the intro..when it drops its not heavy anymore.....
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22-07-2005 12:59 |
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PassDa J.
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Wooooooow Dude sure like that FAT bass in the beginning, real cathy too ... you should've put the volume up a bit though ...
Like how the bass-sound and the melodie change during the song ...
Like the drum-line, running hats are awesome, fit with the snare, cool kick, doesn't fight with the bass ...
I like how the bassline fades out in the outro ... pretty cool ...
I'll give ya a 7/10
It's a very cool tune dude, but it's continuously the same, not many sounds get involved there, you kept stucking with the same sounds ...
Some more change would do the tune good, but the song kicks ass for sure ...
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22-07-2005 14:18 |
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Sensa
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ok first things first, drums r nice n punchy, sub bass is wayyyyyyyyyyyyy too loud, sounds alot better with the distortion.
nice track but give the tune more of a structure, maybe some pads at the beggining or somethin...give it atmosphere.
all in all good track just some glitches.
6/10
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22-07-2005 14:36 |
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optikal_assassin
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whatup greyone, just hittin ya up on this one. bassline is definitely catchy but just seems the whole overall track is rather empty and doesn't really have alot of power in it. The breaks sound kinda weak compared to your bassline. Needs more to fill it out, some different sounds and whatnot and I think this track would come in alot stronger. You know, just try more one shots and maybe some pads to give it a more fuller sound. djsensa made some good points too. 7/10 from me cuz it is kinda catchy.
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23-07-2005 09:19 |
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Greyone
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yeah thanx for the tip.
I guess i was to exited to post it. 
At least now i know how to get some nasty basses.
Now the atmosphere , breaks 'n eq'ing. etc...
My next track is allready ready but i guess i'll wait till perfection is near...
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23-07-2005 12:00 |
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optikal_assassin
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Mos def a good idea man, just speaking from experience. I used to be soo impatient with my tracks I'd try to hurry up and finish and get it put up, but later to find it just ended up sounding completely half-assed and not really good. Take your time man, good things will come out of time 
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23-07-2005 12:20 |
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Surya
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New version here
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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