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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Greyveyard (REMAKE) ' and post your comments here!!!
I added an intro , a sub , some layering , some FX and an outro.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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23-07-2005 20:54 |
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Nick ZZ
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(Listening on headphones Erina is asleep) like the change in the intro and the panning is dope the vocal did not come threw so well, maybe less reverb or turn it up a little. The drop is good, nice and heavy with lots of activity. The drums are decent. The synth sounds good, like amout of distortion added. Outro is good. Z
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23-07-2005 21:11 |
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equipped
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The layering was a success, drum's are much more full soundin. 
Track sound's much better dude. Sound used in intro and outro is a bit weak but certianly work's in giving the track structure. Well done man! Cheers. ++Stu Maggoo++
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23-07-2005 23:09 |
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DJ Hybrid K
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I dont like the intro but, the drop is awesome. the bass is ok but it gets a little anoying after a while. i like the drums alot. the prodution is good other than the hi-end on the drums sounds a bit sketchy.
overall id say a 4/5.
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24-07-2005 00:09 |
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optikal_assassin
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Wow, man, you did a better job on this one for sure. The breaks sound more full now, the only thing that hit me kinda wrong in the intro was the flanging on the amen, really didn't sound too good. I used to try that same thing too with little success. I guess it would have been ok had you not put soo much on it. The bassline, not bad, but seems my ears say it could use more punch to it. It wasn't too bad I guess when the breaks kicked in, but instead of it coming in soo smooth, I'd say put more attack on it, make it kick hard. Not sure what you used to do the bassline with so it might not work like that I dunno. But the overall track sounded strong man, just needs more ass on the bassline and it'll be a winner. Maybe it's just my ears tho, I tend to like bass and beats that hit you hard. Good job tho, got my respects...serious 9/10 
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24-07-2005 09:09 |
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Greyone
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@ Nick : Yeh had some trouble to "diguise" the vocal and still hear what it says.
@ equipped & DJ Hybrid K : intro is so soft to make the drop unexpected and slamming
@ optikassassin : Yeh , maybe i used the flangering too high , i'll soften it a bit. And the bassline is volume max for shure ! ...Else the drums wont have effect. It's hard to find the level-balance between drum & bass.
thanx for the reviews. 
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24-07-2005 11:02 |
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Surya
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Not listening on headphones, Myriam is not asleep...
Drums are a bit static, give them a bit more groove maybe?
Bassline is rather nice, but having more than one would be nice 
Quite nice how much variations you've added, it makes the tune sligly better than average, but it has nothing that makes it stand out...
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24-07-2005 19:24 |
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Greyone
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yeh , next time better i guess...
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24-07-2005 19:27 |
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the previous version was awesome already
this version only gets better
nice intro you put together
the outro on the otherhand is way too sudden
it sound like your gonna build it all up once more an then it stops
nice progress on this one anyway
still find it an awesome track 
nice work
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26-07-2005 14:30 |
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PassDa J.
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Sure love the remix dude ! I listened to the first version and then to the remix, I must say the intro is awesome, cool beat you got there and lots of new effects in the original tune ... you made a big change there like that ... you're a man of his word respect for that
The outro is a lil' to sudden ... but not big of a prob ... I think it's because I paid a lil' more attention to the intro and outro ... nice change ...
@ fisrt I gave you a 7 ... I'll give you an 8/10 now 
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26-07-2005 14:46 |
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Greyone
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26-07-2005 15:49 |
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TechDiff
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The intro works really nicely, but im not to sure about the falnged beat bit cheezy i think.
I like the wizard of oz sample through a comb filter.
The main beat is nice and energetic, with tonnes of layering, but the snare doesnt sound right to me, maybe a higher pitched one would cut through.
I really dont like the bass line, It not a bad tone but gets a bit repetitive and its a bit too standard for me.
There are some really nice thjings going on here and the structure is good, the mix is a little rugged but everything cas be heard so its not that bad.
In my opinion a lot more drastic variation on the drums and bass would me a treat but I think that with most tunes because Ive got a fairly short attention span when it comes to music. but even a completely different tone and rythm would be that out of place here.
Nice tune though and I like the energy and vibe it has.
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27-07-2005 12:54 |
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dj_prophecy
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i gave this a 9/10. It reminds me a lot of Dom & Roland. I especially like what u did to the bassline, but the drums sound awesome, realy the best track u ever made. Too bad I only was able to hear it trough my computer speakers
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