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05-07-2005 19:16
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Nothing wrong with a little FL action, I am glad to be the first to review this, like the dark atmo bass as well. The fade out and in was alright, Pretty dark! Like the Lead and drop the way you changed the synth towards the end of it! The actual drop did good damage on my brain, and the little 1 bar cut was nice as well. Like all of the vocal samples, would enjoy mixing this if you are willing to share the samples. Either way good work, oh, now I get the parent comment! Hihi Z

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05-07-2005 19:29 Homepage of Nick ZZ
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ok will send you the samples soon.
thanx
05-07-2005 19:31
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Thanks! Oh shit you were not kidding with the parent comment! 87'

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05-07-2005 19:36 Homepage of Nick ZZ
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Hope your parent's appretiate your deadly talent's Happy . Big track man, nicley put together. Good stucture! Heavy sound's. The drum's are a little light at part's. Meaning, your hi-hat's get a bit lost with the level's at part's and it woudn't hurt to change them up a bit. Mabye throw a bunch of sticky tight hat's here and there in each loop. Great track man! Really nothing much wrong with it. Interested to hear what Nick ZZ is going to with it. Cheers. Pleased ++Stu Maggoo++ Big Grin

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06-07-2005 00:02
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but theres a serious problem.....theres more low end on the intro than there is when it drops.....
theres a lot of treble on the beats.which is ok for the hats but the snare needs more crack on it. good ideas though.
06-07-2005 02:56
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yeah nice lol like the vox sample. i used that in a tune...
basssline is mean
drums are mean also, i really like them, they could hammer hella strong.
intro was cool also.
nice stabs. i got that disturbd vox sample also, used it very well.
drop would go fukn off with there were more low end...
bassline fkn rocks lol.
with some eq work this could be a fukn beast! lol nice one bruv.
awwww u gotta phatten up the low end... would kill.
might use the stabs abit too much, but i like them.
cool track man... keep up the cool shit

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Vocals are very cool

Drums kickin in: snare is very thin, there's no much what soever. Try layering.

Bassline: quite nice, but not great.

Buildup again: melodies sound more jump up than hardstep imo. But hey have a nice groove to them.

Quite nice, if only the drums had some punch Wink

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06-07-2005 10:00 Homepage of Surya
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I apreciate the comment folks.
I had a little prob. with the track , because of all the vst's i used. So i renderd a part as .WAV and used it again as sample (so CPU would stay low). Then a have the track a finishing touch , added the voc's and equalised a bit (but mastering isn't my best part).
anyway thanx for listening and for the tips.
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evil......... evil evil evil evil.....................
and i like it! nice sample bud cracks me up every time....
nice work on the build up but the drop doesn't have the same atmosphere in it... maybe because the beats are a bit dull....
those low synths are sooo good though would love to remix it....
06-07-2005 10:22
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yeah mate great track , nothing wrong with fruity ,its all i use, cant really add much that hasnt been said so just check ye eq . 4/5

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i can't eq better cause my speakers are...bad. And while i don't have any decent material , not even a headphone , ... i can't eq better. Frown
10-07-2005 23:49
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mmmm need some good monitors to EQ well true...
nice track mate...
its all been said.
keep it up.
8/10
11-07-2005 03:20
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where have i heard that beep noise?

hmmmmmmmmmmm.

the door open sound i made Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

Pleased

nobody knows what beep i am talking about, i bet, it just sticks out like a nuclear blast in my ears.

nice feeling.

where do you get these samples.

that drop has no sub! nooo. so weak sounding Cry

thanks for using one of my sounds. Bigup

Woot

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11-07-2005 17:00 Homepage of Halph-Price
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Very cool track, enjoyed it very much I like this kinda style ...

Too bad the part around 2:10 is not BANG enough know what I'm sayin'? It's like a litlle distorted and empty, there's something missing ... a good bass maybe? There is one but I can't hear em that good ...

Nice vocal samples, german nazi shit yeah ... GAILE SHWEINNE !!!!!

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11-07-2005 17:47
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quote:
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where have i heard that beep noise?

hmmmmmmmmmmm.

the door open sound i made Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

Pleased

nobody knows what beep i am talking about, i bet, it just sticks out like a nuclear blast in my ears.

nice feeling.

where do you get these samples.

that drop has no sub! nooo. so weak sounding Cry

thanks for using one of my sounds. Bigup

Woot


shit ! you recogniced that ? waauw...

anyway ... indeed , it's from the Halp-Price-The-Gaspump-Attendent-Samplepack you send me for that remix compo thing.
Other samples from Nick ZZ ( thanx nick !) and myself.
That door sounded so cool , so i thaugt ...njammy Tongue
Big Grin

and to any producer reading this :
I don't know how to make this bass more bass.
It has all frequenties , so that includes sub / mid / reece.
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any help inhere ???
11-07-2005 17:56
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Remix by Nick ZZ here

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18-07-2005 12:26 Homepage of Surya
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quote:
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Remix by Nick ZZ here


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This is pretty sick, but it's really lacking some sub action though. If ya didn't mind man, I'd love to mix on this one too, I've been sitting here just playing out some ideas in my head as to what could be done to this. Since your eq'ing options are pretty limited I'll overlook that bit. I can't really go too in depth on a review since there ain't much personally I can nit pick at. I'm not too hard to please when it comes to music, and I'm not much of a criticiser in terms of music. But I know a good thing when I hear it. Just eq it and I think it'll be all good. Bigup

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19-07-2005 05:19
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It's all about my miserable little crap speakers :
- The greatest part of the sub i don't hear
- I can't turn the volume max. like it should be.
-There's allways some sort of 'zzzzzzzzzz'-sound .

But i hope to buy some new equipment,
or some phat (but uncompatible) speakers from my granny.

Donnations are always welcome Pleased
19-07-2005 16:46
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