 Nick ZZ - Disturbed (Blowen Your Brains Out)  |
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Nice work man! This is a great re-mix. Level's are much better. Had a listen to the oldie to compare 
At 3:54 drum's are to loud or everything els is too low. 4:25 love that amen more of this would be nice imo. Vocal's are great. That's one hell of a mean sounding synth, well done! At the drop synths especially sound too quite. Man those vocal's are halarious 
. : Nice clean symblz hitin here and there. Really enjoyed the re-mix, great work! Other than a few minor detial's this is a great track. Cheers++Stu Maggoo++
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18-07-2005 08:31 |
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like where your going with this track...
lots of work done on the low synth bass sounds very good with the changeovers and all... usin that sample way too much... and the patern of the drums need to be changed i think...
overall nice workover tho
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18-07-2005 09:10 |
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Intro sounds like you're outside the chillroom, listening to the music inside
Buildup seems to have little to do with the intro.
Lot of face climaxes in the buildup, maybe smoothen it out a bit more so that's it's more obvious when the real drop is comin
Drop: doesn't have any impact whatsoever. The bassline is cool, but should get some decent sub at the drop. The drums aren't phat and pumping enuf either, they don't have any power.
The vocal is defo overused, it's all over the place, it shouldn't be.
Sounds to me you were to focused making this track, not listening to other music in the same genre. If you would have done that, you would have heard some of the flaws imo.
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18-07-2005 12:35 |
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i cant remember if i checked the original or not......anyway......
i have to agree with surya....when it drops it has no impact.
the build ups quite cool.
but the drop has little sub and the beats are a bit square..i think they need more swing/shuffle......
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18-07-2005 15:51 |
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Allright , i'll gonna check the remix :
Intro is mmh mmh mmh 
, nice stereo panning , soundquality is 
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Buildup is cool and intensive.
Drop is a bit dissapointing , I don't know whats missing ? Maybe add a decent sub to it ...
break is dark and has a good atmosphere.
But again , the drop is dissapointing me , it hasn't the effect like it should be.
Your drums improved well my friend !
The overall sounds verry good , just make yo drop more phat and fill it up with sub and stuff.
Watch out for overusing the vocals , the track could be less actractive to hear it for a 2nd time. Keep it going Z.
Here's a fat 
for the improvement.
Laterz..
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18-07-2005 16:09 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by equipped
Nice work man! This is a great re-mix. Level's are much better. Had a listen to the oldie to compare
At 3:54 drum's are to loud or everything els is too low. 4:25 love that amen more of this would be nice imo. Vocal's are great. That's one hell of a mean sounding synth, well done! At the drop synths especially sound too quite. Man those vocal's are halarious
. : Nice clean symblz hitin here and there. Really enjoyed the re-mix, great work! Other than a few minor detial's this is a great track. Cheers++Stu Maggoo++ |
Thanks. I had the Synths peaking, maybe less bass on them? I kinda wanted you to beg for that Amen!
I guesse I could have put it in there a little more. Thanks for the advice. Z
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18-07-2005 21:17 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by 2ginger
like where your going with this track...
lots of work done on the low synth bass sounds very good with the changeovers and all... usin that sample way too much... and the patern of the drums need to be changed i think...
overall nice workover tho |
Thanks, ok an little switch up never hurts. Z
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18-07-2005 21:24 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by greyone
Allright , i'll gonna check the remix :
Intro is mmh mmh mmh
, nice stereo panning , soundquality is
good !
Buildup is cool and intensive.
Drop is a bit dissapointing , I don't know whats missing ? Maybe add a decent sub to it ...
break is dark and has a good atmosphere.
But again , the drop is dissapointing me , it hasn't the effect like it should be.
Your drums improved well my friend !
The overall sounds verry good , just make yo drop more phat and fill it up with sub and stuff.
Watch out for overusing the vocals , the track could be less actractive to hear it for a 2nd time. Keep it going Z.
Here's a fat
for the improvement.
Laterz.. |
Ok, I will go back and fix the drop and I will replace the vocals in places with Fx or that Amen...
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18-07-2005 21:28 |
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What up Nick ZZ...
I remember hittin' this track up over at Acid Planet which I don't feel I really gave this as solid of a review as I could have, so I thought I'd run it across again. I just actually to sit down and play it a few more times to see if it had hit me the same as the first time I heard it. I ran this track up along side the original, and will say I like this one better. It does lack alot though, it definitely needs a more serious bottom end, especially with that bassline you were using I could just see it tearing ass up with a nice thick sub line. I guess the whole vocal sample overusage is just a matter of opinion. I'm not really sure if I would say you overkilled it. Overall the track was solid as hell man. Nice and loud too, just the way I like it. Ima give it a 7/10, just as a personal taste.
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19-07-2005 05:11 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by optikassassin
What up Nick ZZ...
I remember hittin' this track up over at Acid Planet which I don't feel I really gave this as solid of a review as I could have, so I thought I'd run it across again. I just actually to sit down and play it a few more times to see if it had hit me the same as the first time I heard it. I ran this track up along side the original, and will say I like this one better. It does lack alot though, it definitely needs a more serious bottom end, especially with that bassline you were using I could just see it tearing ass up with a nice thick sub line. I guess the whole vocal sample overusage is just a matter of opinion. I'm not really sure if I would say you overkilled it. Overall the track was solid as hell man. Nice and loud too, just the way I like it. Ima give it a 7/10, just as a personal taste.
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Thanks for your Review, I already thinned out the vocals and added a few more amens and also added some sub drops to help push it along. It sounded alot better. I will post (edit 3) soon. Thanks Z
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