baz - Baz-the mood change 90% (working one ;) )

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baz - Baz-the mood change 90% (working one ;) )

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baz

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Please check out my new track 'Baz-the mood change 90% (working one Wink

)' and post your comments here!!!
PS:FOR SOME REASON YOU HAVE TO ADD .mp3 tO THE FILENAME MANUALLY)

fucked up incident going on on the previous upload but this one worked Wink

now i worked on this like two days (cannot tell how many hours)
an it's pretty much finished except for some smoothing i'm struggling with but
it 'll get smoothened out soon Bigup

got advice on this then give it

it's also not the usual chaos i produce( as some of you already heard)
went from chill to hard an back to funk Spliff

critics is welcome as wel as advice; Big Grin

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This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by baz: 24-06-2005 18:35.

24-06-2005 15:55

baz

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huh? what those stars doin here?
ain't no reviews yet?!?

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24-06-2005 16:27

Rude

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lol dude... howcome you've got 4 stars... i can't even hear your song due to the format... i dunno ... it says i have to download some other program than winamp, windows media player, streamplayer, player jukebox, magix jukebox, ....
lol

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24-06-2005 17:53

baz

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for some reason you either need to select the program manually or just type .mp3 behind it dunno what caused this???
anyway hope you try it cuz i downloaded and opened in winamp an it did play Wink

(i recommend typing .mp3 manually worked for me Wink

sorry for the innconvenience though )

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24-06-2005 18:32

Rude

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lol.. mate... i have no idea what this is... 140 BPM?
04:04 hardcore?!
your mixdown is bad... man... is this your first track?
your name is "baz", = "bass", so where's the bass in this tune???
I'm sorry man, but I don't like this at all.............
I'm not gonna rate you down, you can have your opportunity to improve yourself
Greets, Rude

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24-06-2005 19:58

baz

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yeah geuss your right back to the drawing boards i go Wink

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25-06-2005 01:26

cynik

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the breakbeat intro is too long, that synth while it's ok is getting repetitive pretty fast, lose it out in some moments

very experimental, the shift at about the 4th minute, not sure if it works tho, sounds really strange

the synth which first enters is cool, the other one is shit!

it feels a bassline is missing, add one

not really bad, but some reppetition occurs, do changeups, edits, breaks (sounds easier said than done, I know)

sequencing uh, not that good, beats are somewhat ok but tose ghost snares are too loud and non-logical oposed to the main beat

around 7:35 you introduce a full bassline but it's too late then!!! put it at the begining

as with all of the sounds, you made this track bar by bar, think about the structure

mixdown sucks big time, youve got distortions (not in a good way) all over the place..

dunno,, not that bad as to hurt the ears, but nothing exceptional about it

5/10

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25-06-2005 09:51

baz

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to be honest bout the synth twas the first time u used that sytrus synth shit an i indeed could've done a better job here and there
bout the bassline i've noticed it myself but i've already reworked that part also my 140 bmp part has been completely reworked an now it's smoothened out already a bit but still needs some work
the snares only needed some good levelling (added some panning to in a minimal way)
an bout the "insert breaks" part...next update there will be breakz
(reason there waren't any was cuz my slicing tools seemed to trip on my onboard sound card
(plugged in sb audigy an everythings fine )
thx for the advice man Bigup

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25-06-2005 11:26

Arkitekt Arkitekt is a male

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im so confused ???

where is your basssline?

and why are your drums so slow ??

i think the song will have some promise if you pitch it up a hella lot

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25-06-2005 19:57

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OK listening....what the...?sounds like the 80's casio keyboard I had when I was a kid...Don't like it. Hats are interesting, OK your snare is way too quiet...claps now? why? Don't care for it much so far. Layered beats are totally off time at 3:40. What BPM you workin with? Pretty slow...ok I heard one sound that I like...introduced at around 6 mins eeerrrr....errrr-errrrr... ya know? This new bass sound at like 7:40 is alright....well, ditch the first 6 mins and rework the whole track with what's left...and the splash at the end has to go. Well, it changed my mood alright! haha. I think this is the first track I have reviewed from you...hope it is helpful

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26-06-2005 00:21

dubcupboard dubcupboard is a male

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Man I don't with to be offensive
but in a nutshell theres a lot of
work to be done on your material

If your serious about takin this up which Im sure you are
or you wouldnt be here then you're gonna have to emerse your self in drum n bass totally dude

Eat, Sleep, drink, and what ever else you do drum n bass untill it becomes a part of you!

Listen over n over to DnB that you love
and take a stab at that particular type

At the mo' you're sounding way off the mark bro'
your tempo, structure, balancing,arranging, etc all need help.
If you'd like some 'Free' DnB production tips - plug plug, keep an eye on my website as I have
included a section for help with the above, Bear in mind that I specialise in two particular types
of Dnb and if they fall in line with your own particular taste you're laughing!
I mainly work on 'Liquid' and 'Dubwise' DnB

Later Smile

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26-06-2005 03:53

Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male

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I AM A COMPLETE MORON. I APPOLOGIZE.

my defence HE SAID 0 for originality, and that hurts Frown

but ya my tracks sucked the same tie, BUT why is this one even up though? i saw it on the list. my mistake. let's find a better track.

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19-03-2007 05:07

cynik

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well isnt this pathetic. because baz gave you an honest review and didnt like your tune you had to come and slag his two year old track, and at the time you yourself was making crappier tunes than a craphouse that has problems with plumbing and all the crap has surfaced out

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19-03-2007 07:15

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old new Baz rip's!

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19-03-2007 08:15

baz

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quote:

Originally posted by cynik
well isnt this pathetic. because baz gave you an honest review and didnt like your tune you had to come and slag his two year old track, and at the time you yourself was making crappier tunes than a craphouse that has problems with plumbing and all the crap has surfaced out

lol ; thx for this one cynik ; u da man Devil

an i really don't know wtf is going on here ; just this towards all peeps that start dissin two year old tracks :

look where u's at an where i'm at ...
i beat ur fuckin ass with 2 signed tracks an shitloads of tracks to be finished/signed when my comp is up an runnin again
i DON't need to listen to dnb more for i don't make dnb ; i make whatever y'all fuckfaces call it ; i don't care ; as long as i got a crowd to play it for ...

so fuck u Halph price an whatever other morrons started this shit
go play yourself in a little dark corner ... maybe team up an start making shitcollabs asshole('s)

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19-03-2007 17:53

Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male

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naw man, i was reviewing another trakc and i saw your on the side, i am guessing some of the toes tracks can be old. i thought they were the latests tracsk taht need reviewing. i listento your other work it's good.

so i don't know why you're getting so offended? i explained it's a mistake. whatever. you can go fuck yourself too? anyways next track up i hope you'll find it a bit more original.

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19-03-2007 17:57

baz

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quote:

Originally posted by Halph-Price
naw man, i was reviewing another trakc and i saw your on the side, i am guessing some of the toes tracks can be old. i thought they were the latests tracsk taht need reviewing. i listento your other work it's good.

so i don't know why you're getting so offended? i explained it's a mistake. whatever. you can go fuck yourself too? anyways next track up i hope you'll find it a bit more original.

consider it buried then ;

my part of explainin : i didn't know wtf was going on here

thx for settin straight (so deny that pm Wink

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glad it's sorted Cool

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19-03-2007 18:01

cynik

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quote:

Originally posted by baz
look where u's at an where i'm at ...
i beat ur fuckin ass with 2 signed tracks an shitloads of tracks to be finished/signed when my comp is up an runnin again
i DON't need to listen to dnb more for i don't make dnb ; i make whatever y'all fuckfaces call it ; i don't care ; as long as i got a crowd to play it for ...

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19-03-2007 18:51

chomp

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really har to critick, i'll be back in one minute to finish this review.. Roll Eyes

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19-03-2007 19:12

Greyone Greyone is a male

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halph price you should NOT crave up old tracks.

no offence to nobody though

peace

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19-03-2007 23:13

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