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muphasta 
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'smelly sock's on the stairway' and post your comments here!!!
This one is dedicated to ... (He'll know!!!)
I made this one the same way I did 'Four o six'.
this one is rather easier in a strange kind of way. I didnt mess a lot with beats but the synths on the other hand sometimes feel like "oh no im going to trow up" (do not listen while being drunk). There might be some work left here and there so tell me wath yoy think. tnx
edit by thechronic: muphasta uploaded a reworked version of the track, see this thread
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17-09-2004 13:45 |
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stickbubbly
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nice dark sounds. I would add more cymbals and hits to the beat to make it sound more full. The song is missing structure, it seems to be going all over the place. I liked the amen's and the name of the song rules.
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17-09-2004 15:21 |
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Soi
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You mo'fo!!!! I'm gonna get medieval on yo ass! My next track will be called 'Three Cats and Their Stinking Litter' Hahaha! 
You asked for it...
Still glad that my socks inspired you to make a track, stench is good.
Anyway...
Like the variation, it's still remains one one of my important argument.
Cymbal/rides are good.
Nice job on trying to hide the guitars...
they do sound like synths.
Drumfillin's (you should bring 'm in more often) are good.
Snare could use more punch, though, it would make me headbang all the way down the stairway past the socks!
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It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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17-09-2004 19:29 |
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muphasta
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tnx for the revs.
this is what l'll do:- like soi said, i'll try to punch up the snares.
- like Gimp did , add some amen's.
- this way i come to stickbubbly's point about more hits or/and
cymbals using the two remarks above I cann get to a fuller beat. 
I'm also gonna put a nice warm zooming subbass just beneath the beats.
think it'll be ready Tuesday. 
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
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19-09-2004 12:30 |
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stino
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very fond of your sound congrats... the high synth in the pauses are wicked!!!!
agree with stickbublly
i think the only thing it misses is a "song" story...
it does not really build or comes or teases, it's immediately there... except for the beat...
4/5 for your sound!
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19-09-2004 12:48 |
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Surya
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Love those chilly atmospheric sounds!!!
Kinda weird drop with first the amens and then the step break.
Like the metalic snares you threw in, nice.
You gotta sort some EQ stuff out though, coz everything sounds a bit muffled. Maybe go easy on the reverb too...
Dark feel, butalso some ethnic feel too it, which is kinda weird.
Some nice drumrolls here and there, although they sound kinda offbeat here and there.
Some transitions could be better and less abrupt.
I think I'll go for a 2.5/5
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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