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muphasta 
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19-09-2004 22:29 |
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muphasta
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19-09-2004 22:34 |
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Surya
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np man, glad to share them
review next weekend
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20-09-2004 20:47 |
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stickbubbly
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nice one! I Liked the amen's. it could use some more cymbals.
Nice work. 
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24-09-2004 21:48 |
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insurgent
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right on. I dug the choice of verb on the basic beat. Gritty big warehouse sound.
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24-09-2004 23:11 |
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Surya
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Intro is quite dark and haunting, so that's nice.
Drums to kick 
Layering with the tramen isn't that great, but it's only a short part here and there.
Kinda weird drop with first the amens and then the step break.
Like the metalic snares you threw in, nice.
You gotta sort some EQ stuff out though, coz everything sounds a bit muffled. Maybe go easy on the reverb too...
Dark feel, butalso some ethnic feel too it, which is kinda weird.
Some nice drumrolls here and there, although they sound kinda offbeat here and there.
Some transitions could be better and less abrupt.
2.5/5
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26-09-2004 17:22 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
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those percussions were over the top, i call that a tube snare, the snare that you used there later in the song. please send me a copy of those if its not a problem, send a PM, i rely want those! they rock.
also the songs structure had a lot of drastic and sudden changes in it, like the chronic said, i wouldnt have said anything about that normaly but i saw what he said and that reminded me. i was realy likeing some of the beats but they would only play for a little bit then quickley change. maybe try making the songs (in the future) stay a sertain why for a longer tiime then smoothly change as that song progresses, its hard to describe what i want but you already understand because you know what smooth transition is or will shortly with a bit of time and effort. anyways great work so far, keep it up and send me a PM as soon as you'r next song is done!
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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26-09-2004 22:00 |
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thechronic
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lol Muphasta you've come a long way
The first part of the song is really basic, with some flagrant mistakes (hihat too loud, veeery basic melodies, ... )
Balance of the drums was not up to scratch lol.
the track becomes darker and darker as it progresses, I like it from 3:30 onwards
hehe what do you think yourself if you listen to your old stuff again?
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