Marsh 
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Please check out my new track 'Smeagols Revenge' and post your comments here!!!
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09-08-2004 10:20 |
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Marsh
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e z all
please feel free to express your opinions positive or negative i will take note of it all.
Thanks 
*ps* i dont know why it appeared twice after i uploaded it, anybody know why???
yours Marsh
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09-08-2004 10:25 |
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Surya
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We'll fix that.
And next time press the "Reply" button instead of "New Thread" 
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09-08-2004 11:58 |
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Marsh
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hehe oops my bad , i did accidently press the wrong button...wont happen again
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09-08-2004 22:39 |
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Surora23
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pretty dope track...a little chaotic i must say...imo...its more of a chilled track...but at the same time its really dark...but then you kick in some heavy drums...its really abstract...i like it...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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10-08-2004 03:15 |
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thechronic
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Can you tell me which browser (+version) you are using? I'm trying to figure out why the track was uploaded twice...
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If you find spam on the site, please hit the  button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 
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10-08-2004 10:38 |
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Marsh
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to TheChronic
im using IE version 6.0.2800.030422-1633 and service pack1 with XP Pro
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10-08-2004 10:41 |
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djfreemc
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I dig this one. The bass stabs in the intro almost make my headphones vibrate of my head 
I like the build-up of the track. Maybe it could use a lil more variation in the drums towards the end? Love the smeagol sample
, schizo all the way baby!
I seem to hear some little pops after 2.30, mainly on the left channel, bit anoying on the ears for me 
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The mysteries of the distorted snare...
Can't win if u don't play
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10-08-2004 11:05 |
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thechronic
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Originally posted by T.roll
Couldn't download, redirects to listen page 
From there couldn't download either
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Read this
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10-08-2004 13:06 |
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-J-
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don't really dig this,
there's still an amount of basic production issues ...
some of those bass sounds seem to override each other, causes my speaker to blow 
(but that's not a good thing)
there's no real structure in it, the bass stabs you use in the intro, they continue all the way, and the sound remains the same in every direction (don't know if it's a sample or a synthesized bass)
the amen that pops in sometimes ...
it really sounds as if it doesn't belong there ... filter it, eq it, do whatever it takes ... but integrate it ...
too much forced variations to my likings to (amen switching with the other break ... doesn't sound natural ...)
two general comments: structurize & integrate your sounds, make em melt, but keep em clean ...
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10-08-2004 14:16 |
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Surya
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Like the LotR sample, always sounds cool
Pads in the intro are too quiet, give them a boost.
Your one bassline is quite mono, the otherone is very stereo, too much difference -> fix that.
Drums: not very much power, but not too bad.
Don't like that organ like melody... Sounds a bit dull...
Amen sounds quite crisp, but it doesn't blend in with the rest.
Some strange clicking in the left channel, I think it's either the bassline or the amen. Doesn't sound very pleasent.
No real story in the track though, just goos on a bit and stuff...
Have to second what J said...
1.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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10-08-2004 14:41 |
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T.roll
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Yep! Turning of firewall did the trick. Downloading...
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10-08-2004 14:46 |
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T.roll
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Intro is a bit messy. Don't really like distorted flanged bassline.
Sub is ok. Like the breaks that start from 1:29. Unlike Surya i like an organ melody , imho should've been main leading in the track. Kick sould use more mid range.
Result: nice breaks and sub. Liked a couple of moments. But it doesn't have a power it should imho. Also you could try to make it more agressive with boosting 3-6khz range.
Rate for now 2 of 5
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28-08-2004 14:39 |
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Soi
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Some basssounds come boostiin' in quite hard and surprising/shocking,
The beats are very minimalistic i only hear snares, then some kicks but the ghostnotes (and i know they're there) are hardly audible: was that the intention?
The amen-like james brown-break could be very well of with some different eq-ing.
The crashes are also loud.
I like the way you put together a load of samples, without making it a clichésounding track.
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It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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31-08-2004 20:09 |
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charleskoncept
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bass stabs are wicked. sampling is nice.
very dark.... but dark is good. 
the amen break towards the middle is very nice.
although it does kinda drown everything out. the snare is just a bit overbearing. but al;together it is very well done.
3.5/5
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