 SICKorWELL - Bad Check Bounce |
SICKorWELL
SICKorWELL DnB
Registration Date: 24-09-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Bad Check Bounce' and post your comments here!
good new fresh idea please feedback on this tune id like to hear some thoughts on it befor i send this one out. thanks guys here is the finished track of one i put up awhile back gets hard at points i tryd to do something to take it harded a good tune to come out of some dance floor sounds
hope you guys dig it ive been working on this one for a while
SICKorWELL
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04-11-2009 01:37 |
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cynik 
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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the intro feels a little disjointed, think an actual break would help here, liking the edits though
you could lose the high synth after it drops, feels like its jsut getting in the way
dunno, nothing stands out as particularly bad, defo got some nice ideas, especially liking some of the edits
bad check bounce... lol you dont work in a bank by any chance? perfect way of aleviating the work pressure - put it in the tune 
not bad, keep at
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04-11-2009 18:45 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad at all... I'm impressed.
Maybe the weeping guitar could be a bit less dominant as it takes the focus of an excellent jumpup bassline.
Female talking samples could use some threatment to give them a little special touch.
I like the first bassline much better than the second one, also the second one doesn't really have around 2:33 it seems like a whole new tune is getting mixed in. Also the drumline in the second part is quite 4 to the floor K___S___K___S___ which doesn't work for me.
Cut off 2 mins of track lenght, drop the second bassline, add a breakdown in the middle and make some more variations on the bass parts to keep the tune going.
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04-11-2009 20:51 |
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dark genius
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Registration Date: 04-11-2009
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the intro is funky the drums are manic in a good way although maybe a bit too loud...but can drums ever be too loud eh?
the drop 0.50-1.07 im lovin the judy samples! nice cutting. the track drops into pure savage squat rave madness. The drums are top notch. the bass is good but the quiet hi synths are a bit too repetitive [1.07-2.07] then they drop out.
2.30ish the break down is madoff! You keep switching up the drums to keep it interesting good work. you go abit overboard with the samples 3.45-4.17ish even though i think its jokes it will spoil it if you want to play it at clubs. i would try to condense this to a 5min track the first samples are awesome but later on you go over board try to loose some of them. the last minute you go sick on the drums again. good on ya! overall...its bangin rud buoy!
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04-11-2009 21:14 |
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mastamind
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Registration Date: 05-11-2009
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pretty mad when it drops!
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05-11-2009 03:00 |
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chomp
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Registration Date: 06-12-2005
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05-11-2009 23:14 |
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Roel H
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Registration Date: 07-07-2009
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it's have taken a long time, finnaly better basslines and leads.
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07-11-2009 14:50 |
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