Overall it has a good structure, nice melodies, good tension building.
I like the bass melody and use of it through the song, but around 3:00 it sounds like something is missing though. I'm not sure if it's a good idea to drop the bass completely there.
The break-down is quite ok, nice tension building in it, the drop is just excellent, quite satisfying
Another thing which kinda irritated me actually is the beat tripping (like the beats around 21:10 - 2:11'ish), there is something wrong with it, I'd check that out.
Overall a very cool tune, which would need just a bit of fine-tuning here and there.
Love those dirty synths, kick drum is to punchy, hi-pitched. Snare lacks impact.
With the right drums and some of those melodies slightly altered this could be a killer tune.
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Love those dirty synths, kick drum is to punchy, hi-pitched. Snare lacks impact.
With the right drums and some of those melodies slightly altered this could be a killer tune. :-
So if thas the only real negatives u got 2 say then y uv rated it BELOW average?? this masterd version sounds 100% better n crisper than my original mix- dont get me wrong im not wingin bout the score n i DEFINTLY AINT sayin this is pro or gud nefuff to get release but do beleive it better than average-(lots of work n processin done to get sum of my sounds in this!)if others rate it below average then i will take it like a man!
Not bad! But the melody sounds too ordinary and its to noisy for me!
The breaks are very original i thing. If I were You i would use some more melodic instruments! Btw: Dont listen me, Im amateur!
The synth bass lines are cheesy and lame. They need more movement then just a single LFO. And by the way YES they are melodies arse. There are definitely some really good aspects to this track like the sucking sounds and good mix and drum programming and into FX's. It is average actually nothing more nothing less. Your track has to be REALLY good to get above average ratings. Next time dont ask for feedback and then be a little bitch.
fair enuff.had VERY mixed feedbak off this, n dethworm i aint bein a bitch u PRIK!fair nuff if u fink melodies r crap-it not spose 2 b a fukin mozart composition-n fair nuff if u fink the bass is shit but did u actually lisen bcus thers 3 lfos on each bassline all seperatly automated.anywayz at end of day its jus a tune so
Im not saying its a bad tune at all it actually shows talent and promise. The "key signature" of the bass lines if you want to put it that way could be a little more complex and less predictable. I understand its supposed to be a jump-up tune so Im not bashing the major happy feel they have they just need to be a bit more catchy and not so "scale run" if that makes sense. The whole point of this site is to get feedback on the tune so that you can improve it. If your going to reply to ppls comments and be jerky then people will learn to not even review your tune. Just looking out. Sorry for calling u a bitch I just get annoyed easy when ppl get snappy about reviews. This tune only needs like 6 more hours of hard work and then it will be perfect. Good work overall.
cheers mate.n trust me out of all the tunez iv put on ere iv rarely complained about reveiws as often they point out flaws that u havnt noticed or ears hav become numb to and ultimately help u finish the trak.newayz no hard feelins wiv no1.hav defintly had time 2 fink on peoples comments n see how i cud make this tune much better!
The breaks are very original i thing. If I were You i would use some more melodic instruments! Btw: Dont listen me, Im amateur! 
