 Halph-Price - The Fallen World (Kill the P.A.T.R.I.O.T.) |
chomp 
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hey mate ya should produce video games soundtracks, really. not my kind but really drivin something, got an ambiance.
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17-03-2008 22:31 |
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BattleDrone
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It has too much variation, it's has no real structure. The choice of sounds supports this problem quite often. I'm not telling you to make a commercial track, but a more accessible structure would be nice.
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18-03-2008 00:27 |
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2clix
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I think if there were a video behind this track it would make much more sense, not to say that it doesnt make sense. I personally like this it doesnt really say "hey im a dnb tune play me on the dancefloor" it has more of a "listen, im a brute feel" 
I think this track could use more of that vocal and some drum glitches, but not in excess, dont really like the silence @ 3:15, dont get me wrong i love the silences.... sometimes, but this track doesnt feel epic enough for a silence...yet.I think you could make this track really REALLY dark if you put more time into it, the pads are so eerie, love the synth work, drums sound good
Happy st. drunkards day
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by 2clix: 18-03-2008 06:16.
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18-03-2008 06:14 |
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Binary Havoc
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I actually find this some of your more accessable work to be fair.
Lots going on sonically across the whole frequency spectrum n you've done a pretty good job of keepin it all separated in the mix
think the sub and kick are a bit overpowering when they hit together but otherwise I didnt hear anything obviously wrong to my ears
A difficult but enjoyable listen
Enjoyed
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18-03-2008 17:30 |
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Tomos
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Imo, I think Binary got it spot on with his comment - a difficult but enjoyable listen. Definitely sounds like it belongs in a movie or game, not the dancefloor or even a home hi fi system. It chops and changes too much for either of those.
The snare seems to have too much high mid for me. Even as I'm listening on a pair of bass-heavy headphones, it's still very noticeable. Needs more lowish-thump. Kick is clear.
I could imagine NIN doing some of this stuff. I know you're a big fan (me too).
The organ-sounding synth melody sounds all wrong, imo. It's too dirty, loud and too much high mid again. Needs a softer, lower sound, imo. Melody is pretty good tho. Almost gothic sounding.
Interesting, pretty good. (I voted for this yesterday).
Btw, how about some more reviews from you man. 88 votes in 4,750 posts? 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 18-03-2008 19:22.
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