 boomhauer - 'Falling Out of Clubs' |
boomhauer
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Registration Date: 03-03-2008
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Please check out my new track ''Falling Out of Clubs'' and post your comments here!!!
First shot at a drum and bass tune from Boomhauer.
Only just started producing so lots of room for improvement,
EQ is all over the place and the vocals (step to this etc) are just a rough idea until I get an MC to do them properly).
Using FL Studio XXL and some live instruments
Vocals by Boomhauer and Michael Tressit
Interested to know what you all think.
bh
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by boomhauer: 10-03-2008 16:03.
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10-03-2008 15:59 |
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BattleDrone 
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Not bad for a first, seems to have a stereo enhancer on the master making it all sound a bit weird, there's a bit of sound canceling going on. After 1:18 it seems to go nowhere.
The FX on the vocal should have more variation. Very original sounds, needs some more nasty bass action though.
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10-03-2008 16:16 |
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Tomos
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Agree with Battle. Beats are phasing, which doesn't sound good. Also, they are very quiet and thin sounding. The melodies in the intro are very good but the bassline is pretty drab. Sounds like the 3xosc? Vocals are ok but they lack clarity.
Sorry to sound brutal. It's not too bad for a first effort. Keep practicing and your skills will defo get better. 
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10-03-2008 20:49 |
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boomhauer
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Not sure how to rectify what y'all are calling stereo enhancer as there is no such effect on any channel. Strange...
Thanks for the feedback keep it coming
bh
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11-03-2008 10:06 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi , dont like the sample , beats sound too weak , drop soundz weak as well , no sort of presance to the track , bass needs filtering down "imo" sorry mate !!! fruity loops is hard to get to grips with , i`ve got it , but my computers pretty shit , keeps crackling , so i can use it untill i get a new one , keep going !!!!!!!!
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13-03-2008 22:21 |
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mayhem
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i love the start.like how u put the drums in with the strings sound is very catch .could beef up the strings a lil.and maybe layer the beats more to make them loaded and sound more crisp...the start is catch tho i do like the way it starts out , just kinda wanted more into it , loader badd maybe more of a new bassline when it kicks , change it up a lil dont really keep the intro into the track.overall tho its not to bad ..needs a lil here and there work , but its put together very well and it seems like u know what ur doing so keep up the creativity 
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14-03-2008 06:12 |
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ChemicalBass
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This tune has a nice up-lifting feel to it, quite old school. Some of the build ups seam to go on for one bar too many, it sort of trips you up while listening to it. Nice gentle mellody effects ove the top but a bit reppetative after a while. The tune seams to be over just as you want it to do something else.
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15-03-2008 03:05 |
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chomp
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intro sounds funky ! really nice vibes in dat part !
when i listened ya tune i didn't notice any drop... they are there, but too weak, ya b-line need more power, the intro is really better than the b-line part, it should be the opposite...
and i think the beat need ghost snares to add mechanics, you should add a breakbeat sliced and layered on ya drums. phaser/flanger are not appropriate, change them bye a variation in the b-line...
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15-03-2008 03:50 |
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Ictus
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Nice groove melody, the drum beat could do with some work, nice foundations for it though. The effects used are nice and the track changes alot to keep the listener interested, it's not to monotonous. The lyrics are good and add a good depth to the song, the effects used on the vocals are good, makes me think of a nice chilled jazz bar. The song obviously has alot of work still to be done, but you can see where it's going and it deffenately has a lot of protential. It could be a bit quicker and the drums could have do with being in a skip beat to add jump to the track. I think when this track is finished it will be a very good dance track, a very good first attempt that shows great protential for the track.
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15-03-2008 15:53 |
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