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the moneyshot 
str8 outa nocash
Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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Please check out my new track 'rapid movment' and post your comments here!!!
not finished yet i know there aint alot of variation in the drum at the min but just wanted an opinion on over all sound
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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31-01-2008 18:44 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Overall level is too low, make sure you render your track at around 89db, you can use mp3 gain to control/fix this level. Breaks lacks power in the lowend and the low mids. Needs more elements and variation.
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31-01-2008 19:08 |
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the moneyshot
str8 outa nocash
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thanks battledrone, it is no where near finished tho. just wannerd an opinion on the feel and melody. thanks for the tips tho ill be sure to render at 89db from now on 
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31-01-2008 19:25 |
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BattleDrone
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Drums sound quite muffled and are in stereo (make'm mono), the kick is too low, the snare needs more body.
Bass is nice, but the sample hass a "tail" which sounds dirty and should be chopped off.
Once the track starts it's just drums and bass, nothing else (yet), needs work.
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01-02-2008 21:35 |
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Tomos
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I have to agree with Battle. It's much too quiet. Shame, cos the intro melody sounds brilliant with those rhodes/synths. Definitely got an old skool junglist feel this - amens, subs and a few FX. If only this tune was probably mixed it'll sound really good. Takes me back this one. Cool.
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03-02-2008 10:13 |
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collective
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yeah the drums are to stereo everything is sounding wide a far away
you also need to burn it down in a higher mp3 as its sounding tinny
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03-02-2008 11:59 |
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chomp
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love ya intro, it's too, huh you now like old tv shows, stuffs like miami vice... lovely.
but after the drop, i think basses pitched up then down like in "mistral" by dj zinc.
sure it wiil rock ! (for me)
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04-02-2008 16:50 |
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