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BattleDrone 
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Really like it, but those lyrics seem to be quite a rip-off. Due to copyright issues tunes with ripped lyrics get deleted on here.At 2:30 the track gets a cute breakdown which ends in NOTHING at 2:53. Shame, could have been damn good. I noticed several mistakes in the buildups. Don't use such extreme pannig on some of the percussion elements. Keep them more or less centered.
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17-12-2007 12:54 |
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Tomos
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Not my style I'm afraid. Liked the vocals tho - very catchy. Are they copyrighted tho?? Well put together track. You've got obvious skills in constructing a dnb tune with all the little fills, edits and changes. Cool.
Btw, I'm a big Cypress Hill fan so I liked them samples!! A bit of Muggs on this track would be proper sweet. 
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17-12-2007 19:50 |
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chomp
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
the track gets a cute breakdown which ends in NOTHING at 2:53. Shame, could have been damn good. I noticed several mistakes in the buildups. Don't use such extreme pannig on some of the percussion elements. Keep them more or less centered. |
lol, excuse me i'm actualy producing with one monitor and if i don't listen with my headphone i cant see that paning shits, so excuse me next time i'll take the time 
the cute breakdown that ends with nothing is because i told you i have cuted and pasted twice half the tune with vocals and not. 
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17-12-2007 21:04 |
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Halph-Price
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about the minimalist let me say this.
Crank That (soulja boy)
Keep It Simple Stupid
Less is More
nice rapp, and you make that relaly go with that well. nice bass good sound to it, nice deep bass.
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18-12-2007 05:38 |
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Seamless
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Registration Date: 22-12-2007
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Immediate impressions: low end of that 3xOsc over powered everything.
Agreeing that some SFX could help the beginning out and probably the rest of it too.
I'm really not sure how I feel about that guitar stuff. If your intention was to weird people out, it definitely worked with me.
The drum track needs some variation in it. Some background stuff like cymbals at some point, some breakdown pattern changes. new instrumentation.
Also, if you're going to be into minimal track production and without the fatness then I suggest building a drum pattern that doesn't start out with being all over the midrange. That sort of beat is built for the fatness. you need something thats, well, less.
I'm ok with the mix overall for everything except the 3xOsc. However that kind of messes with everything. really getting into the whole spectrum and shaking stuff up...and not in the good way.
I also think it would've been just as well without the vocals. Not better or worse, just the vocals dont really add anything to the track.
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22-12-2007 07:34 |
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