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OBLIVION12 - JUNGLIST

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OBLIVION12 OBLIVION12 is a male

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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'JUNGLIST' and post your comments here!!!

IM GLENN FROM HEMEL HEMPSTEAD ,UK AND AFTER 10 YEARS OF DJING I THOUGHT IT ABOUT TIME I STARTED TO PRODUCE, IM TRYING ARD LOL, BUT FINDING IT DIFFICULT
I WOULD LIKE SOME FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE,
BIG UP

07-12-2007 15:15

chomp

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Registration Date: 06-12-2005
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lol
very good intention in this tune, i can hear it !!!
not very well done produced, you need some mixdown/mastering and maybe layering on drum parts...
i'm not sure because mp3 don't render the truth...
i'll be glad to help you, check out my tunes and if you think i'm able to help you i'll be happy to do that. i wanna help the dnb scene.

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07-12-2007 16:48

OBLIVION12 OBLIVION12 is a male

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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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THANKS! GLAD YOU CAN HEAR WHAT I AM TRYING TO MAKE, I KNOW THE PRODUCTION LETS IT DOWN, YOUR TUNE BELOW MINE IS ABSOLUTELY WICKED, THATS WHAT IM AIMING FOR, I WILL KEEP TRYING! WHAT ARE YOU USING TO MAKE THOSE WOBBLE BASSES?

07-12-2007 17:42

Shunyatta
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Registration Date: 28-11-2007
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I can hear your intention too! And it sounds awesome! The mix is the issue, I'm struggling on that too! I wish we could get together and try and help one another in that area, but I'm not from the uk Noo

Keep at it mate, we will persevere Drummer

07-12-2007 22:43

Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male

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Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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EZ G

Happy to help out man if I can. AIM me if u got specific things u need help wiv n I'll try n help.

Tunes got some nice ideas n flows pretty well. Issue is in the mixdown dude.

Only way anyone get better though is by keep churnin out tunes n this is a decent start.

Nice one

BH

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07-12-2007 22:53

Tomos

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Deffo agree with the big man Binary. Wise words from a pisshead. Tongue

I love the flutey vibes. Great melodies going down here. Nice head bobbin bass.

Beats are really lacking tho. They are so thin and so not rollin. Also, they sound a bit stop-startish. I reckon you need some ghost snares and rides in there.

Mixdown also needs work, but you probably already knew that.

Keep on working on those sounds - get them right and you've got yourself a top notch tune! Big Grin

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07-12-2007 23:43

brucifer brucifer is a male

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Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Like the intro on this. The drums are nice aswell in the intro. Maybe add something else to the third play of the intro though to add more interest. The drums arnt bad, a bit muffled, but maybe add a few ghosts to em. I like the bass, again, a bit muffled. Gets a bit boring in the first half. Maybe add something else. Like the bridge, bit of suspense in it. The base in the second half is wicked mate. Only thing is, it knock the rest of the sound a bit. Something a bit of side chaining could sort. Sounds more like an old track from 99. Nice tune over all. Happy

09-12-2007 08:27

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