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RV_
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Registration Date: 26-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Kamakazi' and post your comments here!!!
First track on the site. Just a preview.
Made on the new Logic, Albino, Kontakt, etc.
Lacking fills, drum loop unfinished, main vocal samples.
Any comments or ideas welcome. Looking for a main vox like the tune Down Low, any thoughts.
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04-12-2007 13:40 |
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theaudiodemon
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First things first, welcome to .be!
Good to have you on board
...now your track... good use of elements here, defo like the rollin drums after the revolution on the drop, I do think you should turn your synth just slightly to make it roll round with the drums and not above it 
Keep it coming, look forward to hearing more from you!
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04-12-2007 13:47 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
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Track has a huge potential. The mixdown needs a bit of work (too much highs). With the right treatment this could be a dancefloorburner. Looking forward to a (more) final version.
Welcome on board man! Great to have you around.
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04-12-2007 14:55 |
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Tomos
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Croeso i'r bwrdd! Welcome to the board!
Proper wicked track mate, no question. Sounds really pro, got all the hallmarks of a dancefloor burner. I love those distorted bass sounds, they're really, really good. Some of the FX at the start are too loud, imo. They really drown out the beats. Tone them down. Same with the effects from 3.39 to 4.01. They seem to really loud during that stage. Also, you need some sort of melody in there I reckon cos it's a little dry at the mo.
Don't like the snare too much. It's too thin for my liking, needs more beef. Beats are rollin nice and fat tho.
Niiiice tune! 
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04-12-2007 19:34 |
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DRS
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BASHMENT TUNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BIG UP RV
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04-12-2007 22:38 |
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Glim
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aww mate, aint got alot of time to write a proper review but just gotta say this track is off the hook!!
Soooooo addictive got my head nodding and replaying it over n over again
structure wise everything is sweet
fx too loud at start and the beatz deff need to be louder and punchier...
excellent tune man
love that melody!!
BOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-12-2007 18:13 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ RV
Welcome
Yeah its a big old dancefloor smasher this mate 
Big tune!!
Shed loads of potential.
Think maybe the drums are just a smidge too low in the mix and the snare is slightly anonymous, but thems seriously minor crits.
Keep em comin like this one Bruv
Sweet
BH
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06-12-2007 19:58 |
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RV_
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Nice one guys.
Thanks for the advice,
will put together a more complete version soon.
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06-12-2007 20:48 |
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Seven Gun
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might i add, the bass work was brilliant!
just try and work the levels of the samples a bit more even.
keep beats n bass in happy equality.
top tune.
deserves more time on the mixdown for sure.
biggles
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07-12-2007 01:33 |
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chomp
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07-12-2007 14:29 |
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quash
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mate this is truly fuckin rinsing. i just love it. right up my jump up street. plenty of energy through the breaks and uplifting melodies. build ups are sweet. i'd say that the drum rolls at the end of the build up could be a bit more distinct but apart from that good eq, compression. every drop brings something new, every dance cell i have wants to bounce. would love to throw this into the mix at a party. i'd but it twice to keep a seeled copy. lucky to be using such good software. cant wait to hear finished version. easy. dj quash
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