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Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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Please check out my new track 'FAT BOY!' and post your comments here!!!


been working on this for last two weeks ish.
think its as close to finished as its gonna be.
i think its quite tight (my best mix yet imo) but lemme know what you think.
did it make your head nod?
thanks to all reviewers, couldnt have improved without your help.
peace massive, 7G

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 05-09-2007 14:49.

05-09-2007 14:47
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yeah def. tight mix here, altho i got bored of the track pretty quick.. not because it's all the same, enough variation there.. it's just, i think the bassline gets a bit dull..but guess that's just taste,some other dude might just go nuts al track trough, also the beats are a little too standard IMO, they're good but not WOW you know? none the less nice production.
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05-09-2007 15:14
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fr..fr..fressssh..yes blood lovin the intro on dis one nice lyric stabz real upliftin dance floor vibe drums r tight(best yet)lovin the hi pass on it nice stabs...drop is fat really like the hi end bass flowing thru it..yes a real tight bitch!!minor point if i have to could do with alil more hihat action from the drop(imo)but thats a minor..big tings bru,,, Drummer

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05-09-2007 16:05 Homepage of philbee
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Drums are very good, simple but crisp, better than those of you pevious track although thes were also pretty tight. That SUB dude is lovely, do you now, you track is lke the drack NEED YOU FROM COMIIX
very similar, but still different its very fucking NICE

LOVELY dude, hope you get signed with this one


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05-09-2007 16:13 Homepage of tryptech
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Drums are very good, simple but crisp, better than those of you pevious track although thes were also pretty tight. That SUB dude is lovely, do you now, you track is lke the drack NEED YOU FROM COMIIX
very similar, but still different its very fucking NICE

LOVELY dude, hope you get signed with this one


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05-09-2007 16:13 Homepage of tryptech
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Intro is slammin' I love it when there are several elements that complement eachother. The bassline needs some more serious "call and answer" bussiness going on, that way it will stay interesting. Also the drumvariation with 3 snares played after eachother sounds too machine like, work on the levels of the hits to give it that human touch.
Definately feeling the track, it really is a fatboy

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05-09-2007 17:14 Homepage of BattleDrone
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like the xtras ya put in here bro! very nice indeed
vocal edits are sweet as, bass line is pretty simple but very effective! big up

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05-09-2007 17:42 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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Another one from Captain 7 eh? Nice one!

Really crisp, clear sounding beats. They're really coming out well. In fact, the whole tune is sounding really balanced. You've nailed the mix between low and high pitched stuff. There's a nice rounded sound to this mix ... wish I could do that you clever bastard!

The basslines are not usually my style but I'm actually enjoying this one. Kinda repeats itself a bit. I feel you could bring it a few new elements towards the second half of the track just to spice it up a bit - nothing drastic tho. Changing the hi hat patterns always works for me, or layering a new snare sound, or mixing up the beat a bit.

Whatever, this is still a really good tune!! Enjoyed that one matey - better than your previous one actually.

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05-09-2007 20:07 Homepage of Tomos
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Right from the top

nice beats, nice phased sound, might turn that down a touch or slowly fade it out as other elements come in.

that vocal sound gets a little grating after a while, dont get me wrong i like it just its a bit over used.

the drop is nice but i think you should drop that top sound completly when it drops and just have the bass.

cool little variations. nice touch

not usually my bag but i like it!!

good work Bigup

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05-09-2007 20:35 Homepage of D2o
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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nice nice. cheers fellas.

this has been getting slammed on internet and radio stations in leeds, leicester and birmingham. good feedback Happy

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06-09-2007 21:44
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i think the b-lin is a little boring to... but as usual excellent vibe on this tune, pure drum'n bass as i like ! Drummer
sure i'll play it next time i mix. yo

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06-09-2007 21:56 Homepage of chomp
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i love the pad/vocal sound that start at the beginning ;-)

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06-09-2007 21:57 Homepage of chomp
XTensionTrigger XTensionTrigger is a male
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Whoobbbbbbbb Tongue yep I like bass in your track, grat square subbass, like the sounds big up Smile

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07-09-2007 21:14 Homepage of XTensionTrigger
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total rudeness - whens this one getting released!

another mental tune bruv - everything on this sounds real top notch and pro. your production skills are nutz mate. fukin luv that sample which is delayed. where did u get that? yeh - i rekon this one should be no1 imo - the production is spot on.

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11-09-2007 04:15 Homepage of Shinyuri
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Love the old school vibe. Bassline takes me back to a simpler time. Smile

Mixdown is pretty tight (although I'm listening on crappy headphones with way too much low and not near enough highs). Structure is nice, although a bit predictable. I might use some more fills/edits on the drums at key places.

Overall, I'd say this is a pretty dope tune.

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11-09-2007 16:45 Homepage of djphrenzy
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cool track with smooth clean bass. i like it.
maybe the vocal is on a bit too much but it sounds good anyway.
really good structure and nice switch ups. i would do the sub part for longer in the track. this is one of the best tracks i have heard so far.

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13-09-2007 14:24
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cool , could need some more high end shizzle

nice sub

nothing special else

could use some grime imo Frown
13-09-2007 19:10
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love the sound of the starting beat, each drum sounds crisp. Feelin the effects on the drops!! I think the vocals blend in nicely for a good buildup. Maybe the beat could get a bit fatter on the drop, but absolutely RATE THAT BASS SOUND that drops in.

Great change, love how the kick breaks up the beat when the second section kicks in. You could do with some more build up in the middle section of the song for the second drop though.

Overall i think there are some really nice musical elements in this track, love the SFX and love the groove. I think you could also add in a new vocal sample that would be more dominant in the track that could be used on the drops.



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14-09-2007 18:57
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Man that fat boy track is quite savage im ratin it bare, i wanted to ask you about remixing the track i added you on msn, mine is ; dukes21_3@hotmail.com

the drums sounding tight and its pretty dark i think you could of got much more darkness out of it, but overall its a Banger. Simplicity is the key manggg.

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