 Chomp - Tasty burger (Preview) |
Shinyuri 
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good name for the track! reminds me of a tune i did.. anyways, the bass is cool, like the way it comes in the second time round. drums could do with an extra patty imo tho. maybe the drop could do with more special sauce too. when i listen to this tune i can imagine a fat man skipping to his local macdonalds. anyways thats a good thing - fat man is a sign of fat bass for me. anyways cool track.
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26-07-2007 19:05 |
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Seven Gun
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ca va chomp
yeah vibes on this track mate.
needs another sharper kick layering, to punch through the bass better, but that kick is ok.
i like the snare and the first bassline best.
maybe too much phase/phat on the other bass.
damn man, that is one tasty fuckin burger! 
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26-07-2007 19:10 |
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chomp
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thx, for the fat/phase effetc, i have to say taht actualy i work on one monitor, the other is dead ! fuckin' behringer, stronger as an action man.... i will fix it but i don't understand for the kick, ya mean i have to add "kicks events" so add more kicks between snares ???
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26-07-2007 19:16 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, defo agree with the other ladies that the beats are lacking - they sound quite flat and empty. You need to really beef them up (sorry about the pun). You can usually do this simply by layering the snare and kick drums. The melodies are pretty good and catchy. Nice bass, although that too needs to be beefed up. The volume is pretty quiet, needs to be louder to give it more edge. Cool.
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26-07-2007 22:29 |
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CULTURE BOY
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mr happyness! easy mate! liking the vibe's ya sending out with thiss track, intro seems kind of dreamy ha ha. riff is nice mate n i think the bass sample fits very well! big up
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26-07-2007 22:33 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by chomp
but i don't understand for the kick, ya mean i have to add "kicks events" so add more kicks between snares ??? |
i mean...
layer an extra kick on top of the one you already have.
use one that has a bit more mid on it. (like a "dak" sound)
the kick you have is ok for the low end, but it would sound sharper with another placed on top of it.
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26-07-2007 22:40 |
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chomp
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26-07-2007 22:53 |
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Schmidi
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OK, I like the E Piano vibe, kinda takes me back to 94-96 feel. EQ the drums up more, especially up the mid range and hi a bit. They are just a bit too quiet in the mix. Interesting bass lines, good variety and change ups.
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27-07-2007 06:25 |
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chomp
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okay right know i'm finishing this one, i have changed the BD, added a breakbeat, eq up a little drums and change the intro/outro melody and soft limited the tune so the volume should increase by 2 or 3 dB.
i upload it as soon as i can. yo
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