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Seven Gun 
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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Please check out my new track 'WHOMPA DUB' and post your comments here!!!
little experiment.
need some feedback on what would "finish" this track off.
reviews are preicious (lol), so please take a lil mo to write one.
done on fruity. amen steppa.
PEACE!!!:-)
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27-03-2007 02:25 |
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rodi
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YELLO
I guess the beat is too loud , make it bit lower , the bass goes all over the place ... ( thats a good thing ;D)
Add some fx's or synth sounds ...
Another thing bout the beat it goes the same ... make it diffrent sometimes , i mean the samples should be the same but the melody is diffrent ...
Hmm make the tune more crazy , add something badass new in the track i mean , not new that was just released , but some sounds , some diffrent beats , amens , make bass go mad sometimes , it would get ya tune more crazeee
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27-03-2007 15:17 |
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chomp
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listenin' it ! here's a live comment:
tripy intro, a little scarying ! a like how the bass was droped, just after the voice sample, ithink when that occured the ebat just need a live drumloop layered to had more presence ! so i like this kind of breaked tunes, not amenst'like tune, it's cool to isten too various kind of beat. maybe your beat is a little to breaked, a little hard to dance on maybe, that's why it need a drumloops with ghost notes to make ya tne more rollin, basses are amazing, i really like them if you can tell me how ya made them i'll be verry happy 
keep it whompin' , see ya and if you wanna do a tune with me ... 
(put ya shit on my ipod know !) 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by chomp: 27-03-2007 16:58.
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27-03-2007 16:57 |
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philbee
Future beats for the streets
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yes breadbin,yeah man ,i reaaly likin what you got goin on,the bass is awsome bruv,lovin the changes(constant),the drums are soundin alil weak my end ,maybee add another layer,hihat line(imo)nice rollin sound m8 ,keep on dis one.
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27-03-2007 19:22 |
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CULTURE BOY
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DIRTY DIRTY!!! THE IDEA IS SICK... THE KICK COULD DO WITH BEEN A LITTLE BIT LOUDER BUT APPART FROM THIS THE BEATS ARE NICE! THEN THE BASSLINE.....DIRTY SYNTHS THERE! VERY WELL USED AND TO MINIMALIST AMOUNTS. THE INTRO WAS VERY ERRIE ASWELL. VERY GOOD TUNE. WANT TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU. BIG UP
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27-03-2007 19:25 |
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equipped
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Big cheers Seven Gun,..that's a heafty well done wobble!,...loose those vox/vocal's,..they make it all sound cheap,..takes away from the best dam wobble ive heard in a dam long time,..fucking fantastic!,...big cheers, look foward to more the Seven Gun Wobble's,..heafty fucking dutty.
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30-03-2007 06:23 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Sounds a bit harsh on the ears. A little too much on the high end I think.
After the drop it's, well, weird, kinda cool, but very uneventful. I think the drum patterns need to be changed up a lot more, they are too repetetive. Make a few more breaks and try to add them into your song.
The bassline, although strange, is rather interesting. This is an intriguing track, and does indeed have a very different sound.
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04-04-2007 01:55 |
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lucid_conduct
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i like this, i think you should beef up the drums and double time them. those two things would really kick this up. also personally i would add some atmo. the bass sounds great and i like the beat, keep it up!
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04-04-2007 05:57 |
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Halph-Price
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so this is the original
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07-06-2007 22:51 |
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