 sephiroth - Jump Up |
Sephiroth 
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Jump Up', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
CHEESY track im working on, no resemblence to twist em out what-so-ever............
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05-01-2007 13:32 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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hmmm, dunno what to say, but this track is quite boring for me, no ofence dude, but it just one synth all over again. No modulation, no variatons...the track is called jump up but it didnt make me jump up. The beat should be more heavy. The kick is not loud enough. Try to layer it with some more punchy one. Also try to redo the beat pattern so its more "jump up". This one is not too jump up imo. Some more bass in the backgroung would be great. The bass in 2:12 is not loud enough. Well, all in all, you chose nice sounds but you didnt do the job right i think. Efforts are clear, but try to work on it more. MOre variation. Cheers
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05-01-2007 14:09 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Yeah no resemblance to Twist Em out or nothing 
. I would have really liked this song, had it not been for the fact that I have rocked out Twist Em out, in many different genres. Breakage RMX is the tops. Anyways, its not really gotta awhole lot going, just sounds like a blatant copy imo. Sound quality and structure are good, but not really much else to say about it. I would try and distort out the Twist Em out synth, to get a different sound, because u lost me the sec I heard it. Maybe if it didnt sound exactly the same I would have taken it in more, if u know what I mean. Keep at it.....RespeKt!@
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05-01-2007 16:16 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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im not a big fan of jump up,but i like this track.the drums are a lil predictable and i feel maybe a fatter snare would be better for jump up,but it does sit ok with the track.i dunno maybe im just jaded to drum and bass now ,but the bassline is a lil plain also and u couldve at least put a dif roll or something coming back in from the break.its not an award winner ,but i like it.
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21-01-2007 06:19 |
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optikal_assassin
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hmmm, this one's got a remix waiting to be stamped on it 
ive got something underway, but if ya didn't mind, i got some ideas i could smack out on this joint if you could supply some of the samps. 
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21-01-2007 06:27 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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yeh mate, no probs, you can do what you like with the tune, wasnt meant to be a serious project anyway, jus a stupid riff i came up with that escalated into a cheesy tune. Ill send ya some samples from it as soon as i got the time,
nice one.
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