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wrm
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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Bad condition', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
Finall stage, i hope...
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02-01-2007 20:50 |
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Shinyuri 
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interesting intro u got going on there, i like those random synths u got going on in there. nice phat drum beat aswell altho u cant here those amen bongos over the large main hits. i like the bass u got on it but maybe slightly overpowering cos when it goes off it kinda drowns out the drums which were really large before the bass kicks in. turn down the bass a bit. other than that its a decent tune. how did u make the bass btw? is it a synth or a sample? anyways when ur mixing down load up an already made dnb track to see what levels u should do. Pendulum is good for that - theyre a bit too nice for me but their production is awesome and second to none. anyways its a good track n if u sort it out it could be really sweet. keep on it
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05-01-2007 10:31 |
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Hey, thanks for the review,
the main bass is a sample, the second bass is made in reaktor. Thanks for tips. I will try to fix it. Thanks again.
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05-01-2007 13:02 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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First up u almost lost me with the apache into the break, you should really just kick it off with the break. Cool lil chill melody going on, now that apache sounds better fading in and out of the break, I will second the dropping the apache at the beginnng 
Oh shit.....some darkness, kind of fooled me with the melody. Now the drop, not bad....is that a time stretch apache on the 16bar of the drop? If so it sounds cool as shit whatever it was. Cool lil track u got going, I would advice shortening the intro, dropping the apache at the beginning, and throw in a second drop with some synth,bass,and break variation. Not bad at all. RespeKt!
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05-01-2007 16:43 |
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when you introduce the melody to the listener in the first part the drums could have some more variations. the apache rolls good, but the rest of the shot like drums (they seem to be a bit too loud on my speakers in contrast to the apache) could have an end break or something (like you putting the cutoff down) in the moment you change back to the clear apache break. the bassline is creative and good designed - the drop-in could be more spectacular, with a short silence before you start, your version of starting is not so clear defined - but thats very subjektive. i like the sound of the melody thing.
essential a straight and dreamy drumnbass tune.
hope you are able to understand my broken language.
big up
jakob
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