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optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled (WIP_)', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


New year, new name, and hopefully a new sound all together. Just a little peek at what I got going on. rather short preview, but I just thought to share. it's prolly not alot to go off of, so sorry about that. well enjoy the new sound, hope ya guys like. honest feedback always a plus. Rinse

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02-01-2007 05:55
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yeah this is a mad new sound from you.
the beats are cool, and the pads and sound fx are sweet.
the drop is sik, nice phatty bass. nice little change ups.
im liking it

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02-01-2007 08:54 Homepage of anf0 D
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mad hectic action all the time, crazy little edits, changes most of the time. wicked rhythmical aspect

sometimes it gets too much, like that fx hit on pattern starts which doesnt go well with the rest all of the time. its very good in the intro, sets the atmosphere but I'd drop it in the bass sequences / maybe switch places with the bass dynamicaly

but as it is. huge, fresh sound you got goin here. 10 points for originality

keep at it Bigup

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02-01-2007 10:48 Homepage of cynik
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Sounds great on originality for sure. Lots of cool edits in here, and I am liking how this has started off. Bass after the drop is a bit dirty and needs to be cleaned a bit, but seeing as how this is a rough preview I can't say much on that kind of stuff. Good stuff man.

How you been?

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02-01-2007 19:27
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Definetly some silly edits in this. Track instantly got my head going once the rythmic section came in. Only thing though at 0:43-0:44 there are tooo many overlaping sounds, it sounds funny as hell when it drops. Now the main drop, gotta love the yeah vocal bit, but u should cut it as if it were in the same rythmic pattern as the beat. Wish I could explain what I mean better Tongue Liking the Ray Keith old skool b-line styly. I would definetly like to hear this track finished! RespeKt!

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02-01-2007 22:42 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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cheers for the words guys. yeah im gonna rework alot of shit in this, i was just trying to get some general ideas in place. good pointing out that fx hit cynik, now i sit back and listen to it, it's outta place, like alot of things actually lol.

@ethereal - sup bro? not much going on , just been living the crazy ass life for the last year lol. been wondering if you was actually still around or not.

yo anfo, big ups for the words. glad ya likin it, a bit different than what ive done in the past but hopefully for the better.

yo ikon, i know what ya sayin' about the vocal bit before the drop. thats what i was trying to get accomplished with the beats just before the drop. glad ya liked it too.

im thinking of gettin' more variations in my bassline melody, seems a bit flat.

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02-01-2007 22:42
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quote:

@ethereal - sup bro? not much going on , just been living the crazy ass life for the last year lol. been wondering if you was actually still around or not.


nice, long as your having fun ya know? Hows the little one?

Been doing some stuff lately, reworking one of my tunes that I finished just a month or so ago. Making it sound better, while working on some other crap as well. I was just talking about how you disappear for awhile then show up for a bit in that endless cycle with a friend a few days ago. Then here you pop up. Always wondered if you would stay around long enough to even work on something together with. haha

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03-01-2007 07:03
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now i sit back and listen to it, it's outta place, like alot of things actually lol.


nuh, just that one hit. I actually like that off-feel created with different samples..

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Sick intro. Liking it. Interesting beat going on there. Bass is awesome. I want more of it!!! You could play with it more, some more variation... SHort clip. Nice!!! I wanna hear the whole track. cheers

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03-01-2007 14:37 Homepage of wrm
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good intro , sounds pro with those sounds , wicked edits , but as said , sometimes too much fx , the good intro starts to be a bit too long , ah the bass fell nice one , sounds nasty but the tune doesnt seem to drop at all Frown ...

so maybe make the intro wit less beats n drums or make the drop harder fuller, dunno exactly , the sound eand eqing is amazing , structure could be better.

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03-01-2007 15:22
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I'm Big optikassassin fan, bigup mate, recommended track by XTT need full ver. Wink

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04-01-2007 23:46 Homepage of XTensionTrigger
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Diggin the tight soundin drum's,...revers bit's work a real nice effect,..heafty soundin vocal at->1:26,..this a beuty tune,..no messin,...A totally fresh sound your crankin on this,...not like your older stuff,.,..allway's good to change thing's up,..anyway im diggin this track allround,...serious ripper in the work's Drummer ,..look foward to hearin what you do with it,...& again,.>nice to see ya back in action,..cheers.

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05-01-2007 00:17
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just had another listen,..love the way your building thing's up,.. each few bars,..bringin all the element's in bit by bit ect,..gives it all some serious flow fat man,...your structure is beuty no doubt,..just had to point it out,...cheers. Big Grin

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werd, thanks for all the great fedback guys, tho negative crit is always a plus in my book. just to help me stamp out the bad shit. but i really appreciate everyone's thoughts, helps me stay motivated! Rinse

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05-01-2007 03:12
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Very nice start to the track man -
+) mad build up, definately my favourite bit, loved the way u brought in all the elements to really build up the atmoshpere. Bass is phat.

-) Felt the bass came into too suddenly. Could maybe have a few bars drop down at 1:27 and some kicks build up maybe. Have a fiddle and see what sounds good.

This is a great start, looking forward to hearing the finished version of this bad boi

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