 Bulls-I - Dreamers Like U |
Bulls-I 
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Registration Date: 19-06-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Dreamers Like U', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
Was just checking out some wavs when I encountered this one, been working for three hours now and I'm kinda stuck, feel free to help me out!
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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30-12-2006 15:21 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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intro is cool , could be more building up soundwise (for mixing in by dj's)
that trommelgeroffel before the drops is awesome;
drums are nice and fat , but ghostsnares are needed (duff ghostkicks for example). for the rest the intro seems ok
i i i i i i sound is amazing , sounds like a renegade hardware track or something verry classy ! , jazz thing is cool too , hoe hoe sound is somewhat overused. Synth coming in , nice melody , also the dark string (1:17)in the background (add sub to this one so it growls , i have a vst called subsynth to put subbass beneath your synths) ah yeah and i should do the darkstring togheter with the synth at 1:04 to get directly that full nasty shit , allso some more bassstabs and efect noizes are needed inhere to fillup things and to create some more atmosphere.
synth is what to thin imo , i know i do also use those sort of synths but im kinda disliking it because of the emptyness and coldness of the sound.
you can throw the the synth through some vst's to become a more warmer thing.
for the rest this track is good eqed , good drums and little fx , you just need to make things more fit into eachother by blending and more atmosphere.
keep it up 
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31-12-2006 12:20 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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hmmm, i dunno if it's just me, but ive been hearing alot of rave and drum n bass mixed together lately. well anyhow, first off man, things are pretty cool when it drops but that damn laughing is kinda annoying after hearing it over and over. maybe not use it soo damn much. synths i dont think do it justice. like greyone said, i think the synths sound too thin and kinda distant to me. i think you should work on kicking off some kinda bassline in this. it needs bass man, a def must. the rest seems ok tho, pretty good beat, and as greyone suggested maybe some ghost snares in your breaks to give it some mo' swing. just kinda flat with that 2 step. spice it up. maybe level your breaks and synths a bit more to keep the breaks from running over top of everything esle. kinda hard for me to suggest where to go with this cuz its not really something i would do but my biggest thing is get a bassline in there and throw in some other sounds other than that laughing, if thats what it is. good start tho.
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31-12-2006 21:00 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Deleted because of copyright violation: contained a sample from the movie "Robots".
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