drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » delicious delicious Author Post jester1234 Cool Tourist Registration Date: 28-06-2006 Posts: 26 ok peeps first drum n bass track iv put up 4 review. i know the intro and maybe the 2nd drop arnt good enough jus wanna know if im heading in the rite direction http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4825512&q=hi 29-12-2006 12:02 jester1234 Cool Tourist Registration Date: 28-06-2006 Posts: 26 lol 30-12-2006 12:59 jester1234 Cool Tourist Registration Date: 28-06-2006 Posts: 26 come on guys help me out n il return the favour please 02-01-2007 12:51 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  boh. youre selling it. any luck yet??? anyway. the intro bored me, shorten it up a bit that snare is too resonant, like hitting a can, no thud, oomph. layer it. also where did the kick go? atmos are not bad. bass is alright, but its missing a theme, the lead at 2:50 just doesnt do it for me, very awkward delay/echo going on too strange track. but it would benefit greatly from a serious beat, because its very snare driven, so fatten up what you got going here p.s. you dont need to "return the favor" cause all of my stuff up here is old and no more in need of feedback... __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 02-01-2007 13:32 jester1234 Cool Tourist Registration Date: 28-06-2006 Posts: 26 no luck sellin em mate only do the price thing so no one nicks the neats man. thanx 4 the feedback too i needed it bruv. 02-01-2007 19:10 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » delicious