drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » camo - yours truly camo - yours truly Author Post camo Wicked Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2004 Posts: 346 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'yours truly', post your comments here and vote for it!!! keepin another tune rolllin u like this one? This track has been deleted on the producer's request __ keepin it rollin` www.myspace.com/camopdj 21-12-2006 14:33 ninja spice Tourist Registration Date: 14-12-2006 Posts: 21 it's kind of frustrating, because there are some interesting ideas in it, but it needs a bit of work though. the opening is interesting but badly paced - the tracks less than 3 minutes long, but over a minute of build up. and once it does get going, then it's too repetite and uneventfull. which is a shame, because the sound is good. it might have been a good idea in the composition of it, rather than to have almost everything playing just the same tune, to have them contrast more. there are parts where the bassline does it a tiny bit, but it's not really enough the slight rock element to it worked well, especially as it wasn't overdone. overall, i would say it was some nice ideas, mismanaged. __ ____________________________- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502336 21-12-2006 18:50 camo Wicked Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2004 Posts: 346 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by ninja spice the opening is interesting but badly paced - the tracks less than 3 minutes long, but over a minute of build up. the complete tune is more than five minutes long, i just upload clips.... almost every tune got an intro bout 1 - 1.30 minutes build up. thx for ya review __ keepin it rollin` www.myspace.com/camopdj 21-12-2006 20:12 ninja spice Tourist Registration Date: 14-12-2006 Posts: 21 quote: Originally posted by camo almost every tune got an intro bout 1 - 1.30 minutes build up. the longest i've done was "shoten zenjin" which sounds like it's build up is about 45 seconds, but then it turns out that it only builds up to a build up, which is about two and a half minutes. then the main song comes in with more of a whimper than a bang, but oh well. i often just get straight in with the drums so you know what you're getting. and then have a drop very early in before bringing in more stuff __ ____________________________- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502336 21-12-2006 20:17 camo Wicked Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2004 Posts: 346 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by ninja spice i often just get straight in with the drums so you know what you're getting. and then have a drop very early in before bringing in more stuff would like to hear ya tunes, why u arent uploading em? yeah, u can handle the intro as u wanna......different tunes, different intros cheers __ keepin it rollin` www.myspace.com/camopdj 21-12-2006 20:46 ninja spice Tourist Registration Date: 14-12-2006 Posts: 21 quote: Originally posted by camowould like to hear ya tunes, why u arent uploading em? there's all kinds of rules and things before you can. but i will at some point. i don't get time to be on here very often. but i've got a page with loads of stuff here... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502336 half jungle, some hip-hop and other stuff. there's even an album for sale for a whole 8 dollars (only about 4 quid thanks to bush being rubbish at his job) http://www.soundclick.com/Store/digital/...6&albumID=13916 __ ____________________________- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=502336 21-12-2006 20:50 cjstyles Wicked Producer Registration Date: 06-07-2005 Posts: 376 Helpfulness rating:  Bin loving your tracks recently but wasnt feeling this one quite as much. Drums are cracking as always - cant fault them at all. Wasnt feel the hats on the build up, sounds a bit like the metronome option you can get on digital pianos to help you tap out the beat. Build is pretty good but does seem to drop a bit suddenly. Filtering is nice as always. Main loop is good but does get slightly repetitive but i know this is only a preview so prob wont be a prob in the finished version. Production is spot on as always but i think is track needs some structural tinkering. some of the elements dont quite seem to gel at the mo. __ NexGen / Plush / Liquid Brilliants / LDNBmusic / Ambra Paul SG - Hidden Smile (CJ Styles Remix) forthcoming Ambra 27-12-2006 18:23 geeks Tourist Registration Date: 04-10-2006 Posts: 11 crackin stuff once again, bass's got a lot of drive to it, was wondering where u get your samples from, they're lovely 24-01-2007 04:18 intricate Producer Registration Date: 02-08-2006 Posts: 65 Helpfulness rating:  nice !!! good drive but try use other sub maybe bass guitars or contrabass ---->http://www.jazz.org.il/images/eli-magen.jpg __ http://soundcloud.com/stk13 24-01-2007 16:56 anf0 D CXNT Registration Date: 31-03-2005 Posts: 1,196 Helpfulness rating:  nice arrangment n sounds.... but sometimes the bassline is out of tune with the horns n stuff i think... sounding very nice though for what it is. __ [R] CentaSpike :: Tracks 25-01-2007 02:27 camo Wicked Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2004 Posts: 346 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by anf0 D nice arrangment n sounds.... but sometimes the bassline is out of tune with the horns n stuff i think... sounding very nice though for what it is. yeah..thx for commenting..thge bassline sucks!! but i made a new version, nu b - line, nu brex..now its a GOOD tune... cheers __ keepin it rollin` www.myspace.com/camopdj 25-01-2007 12:41 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » camo - yours truly