hydro-plane
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Registration Date: 26-10-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Psi-Tech' in the listen page and post your comments here!!!
__ josh voinar
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08-11-2003 16:51 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Same problem as with your other tracks: sounds like you're just fooling around with your stuff a bit, with no real goal. So work on that structure more!
Drums should be louder, snare is far too quiet.
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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13-11-2003 12:58 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Hehe have you got a 'randomize' button somewhere in your software??
The beat is decent and I like the bass too (bit simple but efficient) but the melodies are not very good IMO, especially the one that comes out of the blue at 1:29...
Seems to me you got the skills and a good ear for sound, but don't want to spend a lot of time on making good melodies, while this is really important!!
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Binary Havoc
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Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Whooaaa, chuck it straight in there style! I always like some sort of intro! Really fat sound though occupying a really full frequency range. Nice tune,no enough variation
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25-07-2007 22:30 |
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