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Philthy McNasty 
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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17-12-2006 23:38 |
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Mantrah
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Registration Date: 19-12-2006
Posts: 9
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yo
ideas
1)i rekon u could stretch out that intro a bit...put some hihat action in, tease the listner with the drums i dunno, it could add a lot to the impact of the drop.
2)the bassline is sweet, but it could do with being broken down a bit more imo. when you get the vocal smp in on the breaks, mash the bass up a bit to add variety...to its credit...it doesn't get boring...it could just be more interesting
3)the 2nd break is ok but not really to my taste, the rhythm gets a bit tedious after a while and given the intricate beat5s you have in the tune, some slicing, some more pads could be sweet.
4)the third break down and beats are tight.
Sound
-i really like the sound production on this tune 
, the beast are pumpin' and the bass line goo too
nice 1
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21-12-2006 01:36 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Thanks for checking, yeah I pretty much just made this tune to practice my structure and drops, everything except for the final drop is pretty basic imo. I will rework it, but since I have made a few songs just to get the structure part right. My next tune, I will be going off, since it seems now that I got the structure, sound, and I have always had good ideas, even when I first started according to everyone on here, I just never executed them properly. So the next new tune, will be good and complex like the rest of my tunes. Just this time it will have proper structure and sound 
! RespeKt for checking!
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21-12-2006 06:48 |
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ninja spice
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Registration Date: 14-12-2006
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this is well put together and produced.
the vocal sample is well annoying though. no i don't want to go all the way. i nearly stopped it there.
it does get a little repetitive in places. and those places are a little too long.
the drums work well, but the part from 2:14 didn't. that's the thing with experimentation - some bits fail. maybe the music could be a bit more developed and audible, but i don't think it really matters for this kind of thing.
the overall sound is good. a bit of tweaking and it could be better. but it's mostly there.
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21-12-2006 20:05 |
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Saikonutta
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Registration Date: 09-11-2006
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intro synth sounds too cheasy,
incoming hihats are to silent and to "plastic"
the beat you use is so much used, it's not original anymore...
nice when you pitch the drums,
vocal is too loud
flow is too repetitive after the drop, some higher pitched synthbasses or other sounds would fit in well, and (much) more variation also (sounds, patterns...)
I bet you don't make your own samples... 
for a mainly sample based tune this could be waaaaayyyyy better...
Sorry, but I.M.O. music is much more than tweaking a bit of VST's and using 5 patterns (In a matter of speaking off course)...
but, cheer up, your sound quality is quite decent 
Cheers
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24-12-2006 03:29 |
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zsoloka
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Registration Date: 28-12-2006
Posts: 1
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csQ hogyan lehet letölteni a muzsikákat??zacc
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Hy everybody!!
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28-12-2006 16:08 |
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