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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Klok', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

Hi, I reworked the track and here´s what came out. Replies welcomed

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17-12-2006 23:30 Homepage of wrm
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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I like the intro, but it sounds more like a drop than an intro. Question....what the fuck is that vocal saying? The firefight is a lil loud for the other beats trying and balance it out so it rides smoother. 0:54 ....that is some serious fucking bizness right there Drummer Drummer Drummer . Firefight, sniper, and 2 forms of Amen?? Werid combo imo. but the edits are good. and I cant get over that shit at 0:54 You have some really good ideas in this, just wish it didnt bounce around so much. RespeKt! Trying having more of a direction, instead of having like 4 or 5 songs in 1.

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18-12-2006 17:21 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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lol, thanks mate. The vocal says: Do you wanna clock me? You think you can take me? c`mon... thats it. I will trz to balance those beats to flow more smoothly. thanks

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18-12-2006 18:12 Homepage of wrm
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Yo also, just a heads up! Put this on ragga-jungle.com. I notice you will get way more responses on there when it comes to Jungle bizness. And just to let u know, I have rocked ur track 3 times since leaving the review Big Grin

Edit: Take out the u wanna clock me part. And just leave the think u can take me, then add delay on the me, and drop the come on before u come with ur biznezz! Just an idea. RespeKt!

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18-12-2006 19:01 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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yo.
this is a good solid track with good points and bad ones..

ideas
1. The beats are good in their own right but i think thats there are too many going on...while you have got the mashed up drumcore vibe down nicely, thre is so much variation in the beats that the song loses continuity.
2. The second break down goes on for a bit too long imo. Why don't you make the intro longer and cut the middle one down a bit.
3.Sometimes it would be good to leave the beat on for a bit longer...less breakdowns and more pumping dnb! If i was mixing this in a set, i would be put off by the fact that the main beat bits just don't go on long enuff.

Sound.
1.Some of the drums lack the power that makes dnb really pumping...the bass is really deep and dirty but the drums just aren't load/powerfull enuff imo to do it justice.

nice one!
19-12-2006 16:47
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coool....enduser like...love the play with the amen break

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