 n8teman15 - anarcist nature (unfinished) |
Mantrah
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Registration Date: 19-12-2006
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yo...
certainly an interessting tune...here are a few ideas.
Ideas.
1.The synths in are ok, but the don't really hit ya...and they're not really in tune....maybee tweak the melody and change the sound a bit.
2.the intro is pretty good in generall but it doesn't quite go on for long enuff....in fact all the different elements of the song go on for very short periods before changing....you could afford to let things go on for longer before changing em.
3.Imo, the tune could be a bit faster...make it a bit more thrash.
Sounds
1. I don;t think the kick is big enuff. Thy playing with the eq a bit to give a bit more punch.
nice one!
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19-12-2006 16:54 |
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ninja spice
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Registration Date: 14-12-2006
Posts: 21
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I don't like the synths much, especially in the beginning and they are way too loud. every single vocal sample in it is annoying for one reason or another. but the drums almost make up for it. there's a nice variation of different drum samples in it, with a range of sounds.
the randomness of it is the best thing. especially in the drums and the bassline. the pacing of the track was about right. there was none of that waiting for stuff to happen, and it never got anywhere near being repetitive. you could have got away with making it fractionally longer. as long as you didn't fill the extra time with that synth or the bloke singing.
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21-12-2006 19:34 |
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demolitionkid 
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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i see what you wanted but its just not meshing together right.honestly it sounds like a lot of records mashed together.what are u using to write with?try ableton and reason they really work great together and are both for mac as well as pc.
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10-01-2007 07:03 |
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