Parasite - Where i'd like to be |
Paracyte
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Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Where i'd like to be', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
Thats one of those tracks what you dont have a clue what to do with
so all comments and hints realy welcome.It got something but i feel something is missing.Check it out.
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10-12-2006 08:34 |
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Mantrah
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Registration Date: 19-12-2006
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yo....
the ideas for this track are greatand the track itself has a lot of ponetial but i think that there a couple of things you could have a look at
ideas
1. The intro is nice,and so is the drop. butbut they don't fit that well
together. try to feed in the main synth theme a bit at the start of the drop to add some continuity(maybee chop it up a bit).
2.the gap between the first and the second them could be longer...cos their pretty different...or....use the second theme as a tail to the first one. have a sort of mashed up badrobot/pendulum vibe to it?
sounds
1.there is something a bit tacky about the intro synths...a bit to much of a synth-string kinda feeling....i'd go for a more realistic string patch personally.
2.The kick could be firmer, less high eq, more low, maybee a bit more punch. same with the hats.
3.the percussion that comes in at 4.08 is great, but could also be a tad louder and more prominent imo.
nice one!
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Mantrah: 19-12-2006 16:36.
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19-12-2006 16:34 |
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Paracyte
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Yeah ,this one sucks,
i will remix it again, i know there is a lots moe work to do.Anyway thanks for rewiev .
God Bless.
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19-12-2006 18:35 |
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Nick ZZ
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Not really grabbing me with the choice of sound selection for the entire intro.
The snare can use a little more EQ, and drumz need a lot more variation.
Like the synth at 3:00, it's nice and I like the counter synth.
The second half of the track is better. Not a bad track, the quality is alright, maybe more drum variation....
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20-12-2006 03:56 |
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Paracyte
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
Not really grabbing me with the choice of sound selection for the entire intro.
The snare can use a little more EQ, and drumz need a lot more variation.
Like the synth at 3:00, it's nice and I like the counter synth.
The second half of the track is better. Not a bad track, the quality is alright, maybe more drum variation.... |
Yeah ,you right.I will mix it again,still not have enough time to finish new project and old ones as well.Cheers for rewiev.God Bless.
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21-12-2006 07:27 |
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