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Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Where i'd like to be', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

Thats one of those tracks what you dont have a clue what to do with Smile so all comments and hints realy welcome.It got something but i feel something is missing.Check it out.

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10-12-2006 08:34
Mantrah
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yo....
the ideas for this track are greatand the track itself has a lot of ponetial but i think that there a couple of things you could have a look at

ideas
1. The intro is nice,and so is the drop. butbut they don't fit that well
together. try to feed in the main synth theme a bit at the start of the drop to add some continuity(maybee chop it up a bit).
2.the gap between the first and the second them could be longer...cos their pretty different...or....use the second theme as a tail to the first one. have a sort of mashed up badrobot/pendulum vibe to it?

sounds

1.there is something a bit tacky about the intro synths...a bit to much of a synth-string kinda feeling....i'd go for a more realistic string patch personally.
2.The kick could be firmer, less high eq, more low, maybee a bit more punch. same with the hats.
3.the percussion that comes in at 4.08 is great, but could also be a tad louder and more prominent imo.


nice one!

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19-12-2006 16:34
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Yeah ,this one sucks, Smile i will remix it again, i know there is a lots moe work to do.Anyway thanks for rewiev .

God Bless.

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19-12-2006 18:35
Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male
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Not really grabbing me with the choice of sound selection for the entire intro.
The snare can use a little more EQ, and drumz need a lot more variation.
Like the synth at 3:00, it's nice and I like the counter synth.
The second half of the track is better. Not a bad track, the quality is alright, maybe more drum variation....



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Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
Not really grabbing me with the choice of sound selection for the entire intro.
The snare can use a little more EQ, and drumz need a lot more variation.
Like the synth at 3:00, it's nice and I like the counter synth.
The second half of the track is better. Not a bad track, the quality is alright, maybe more drum variation....



Yeah ,you right.I will mix it again,still not have enough time to finish new project and old ones as well.Cheers for rewiev.God Bless.

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21-12-2006 07:27
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