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Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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09-12-2006 20:09 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Ok first off this is not my type of music, so i will try to be the least objective, and look at the overall tune. Very mellow/angelic vibe going on. Its hard to put my finger on it but I think the pitch is off alil in the flowing pad. Your breaks sound a lot heavier sound wise in this one, but the kick seems to still be a lil in the back, but not as bad as ur first track. Ok its offical I am sick of the vocals at 2:45 
but thats just me. There could be more variations in ur breaks after the second drop. I like ur synth work it does the track justiice, but u need to cut off some of the highs because u have so much going on in em, and its just gonna turn someone off that they're ears are feeling like they are gonna bleed after 16 bars of it, but again good synth work none the less. Just an idea, drop the vocals after the first drop, and bring em back at the end, so they dont seem so repeatitive, because this is the kind of track that u need to keep people listening too, and for me, if I wasnt doing a review, I would have turned it off after the vocals repeated again in the drop. But thats just me. Not too bad, rethink the structure, and the breaks in the second drop, and try and remaster it, for the kicks to come through, and for the synths to not be soo screeching.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Philthy McNasty: 09-12-2006 20:49.
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09-12-2006 20:46 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
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Hi!
intro: know this sample...i got it myself
..vocal cool...bit cheezy,but cool!......high hats n toms also good......
1:10: drums bit weak....is this still intro??......
1:30: ok...dropping...synth isnt bad......you could use some overdrive......
2:00: cool high synthline..me like.....
pretty good overall...respect!
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10-12-2006 03:17 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Thanks for your review and comment,like i've said thats old track,i may come back to it and try to mix it again ,but will see.Thanks again. God Bless.
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10-12-2006 08:18 |
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