 D Juice - Eager Desire |
D Juice 
Producer
Registration Date: 15-08-2006
Posts: 59
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Please check out my new track 'Eager Desire', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
This is a track for training my skills
please revieuw, let me know if you like it,
you'll get the high rate mp3 as dub and rights to use it for mixing and stuff.
luuk_bos89@hotmail.com
Thanks,
D Juice DnB
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"Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? " 
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20-11-2006 18:27 |
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intro beat is a little rigid, and it could change to the fatter beat a bit smoother.
dont like the detuned choir.
lead is nice though.
altogether lacking a bit of sub, thin out the lead and layer a b line underneath.
it needs more layers of beats as well, the ones you have are alright it just needs filling out a little. some good ideas in places though.
but its just my opinion.
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20-11-2006 18:40 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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not liking the choir either. if youre gonna put a choir make it more human, you can clearly hear its a pitching sample
dont listen to munki tho on the lead, its good, in fact its a bass not a lead. but yeah , try and bass it out a bit. waves maxbass? a midrange eq notch on it would make it nastier too. I'd even sidechain it to the kick and crank the gain to make it pumping as you got lots of space between the hits for full meaty bass
those drums are awfully like noisia - subdue, in fact the whole track somehow reminds of noisias stuff. highats are a bit out of place, perhaps pitch them down and push up the volume
Im interested what will become of this
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23-11-2006 07:36 |
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