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Please check out my new track 'Feel Your Pain vocals by Essence', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
The vocals are by the girl who did them for Dirty Jungle MuZiK. Check it, she is gonna lay down some vocal fills, so its not totally finished but almost. RespeKt
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15-11-2006 19:21 |
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GREATT
relly nice nothing to say about it very clear equalizing just like its produced life in ma room
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15-11-2006 20:23 |
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Philthy McNasty
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17-11-2006 17:31 |
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ok.
the vocals arent at the right pitch, they aint in tune with the rest of the track. which is a pity as your beats /tune are getting better.
id ditch the vocals. find an atmospheric spoken sample( something that hasnt already been used) and go with that. make something else with the vocal, but find the key that they are in and build the tune around that (find the root note)
i would be interested in using the vocal on something of mine though 
maybe a collab. let you see how we do it
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17-11-2006 18:03 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Thanks for checking it. Yeah one thing though when I make a tune using her voice, she doesnt want me changing pitch or using delay, cause I guess it takes away from her vocal skills 
. Just like in Dirty Jungle, but I did make that track around her voice so it wasnt hard to get it on the same level if you know what I mean. But on the collab, I can talk to her about u using her voice, I dont care, but I am sure she would lay something down for u, maybe. I'll ask her. RespeKt
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17-11-2006 18:09 |
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dude.
i hate to be the one to point this out.
but YOU are the producer. yeh ok you have to b willing to compromise a bit, but you have to treat a vocal in a way that makes it work within the track, and if that means running it through a vocoder or even ripping it up and starting again then thats what has to be done. Even if it gets to the point where you only use one word or phrase from the entire vocal, its a little different if your being paid to record someone, u kinda have to do what they say and you can only really politely suggest an alternative, but this is your music.
anyway like i said ditch the vocal, change the track a bit and upload it again. use the vocal on something else and this time tune the track to the vocal.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by utter muppet: 17-11-2006 18:22.
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17-11-2006 18:22 |
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ok review time
nice chill intro. this does have some similarities with your previous track.
yep vox are not in tune, feel out of place, glued. not a bad idea tho.
when the heavy (tr)amen/firefight enters things get messy in midrange so try cleaning up that beat
track deff not works because of them vocals. what munki said
nice progress youre showing man
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17-11-2006 19:31 |
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Philthy McNasty
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This is that track, I had u listen to cynik but with a way different intro. I just asked for some deep sounding vocals from her, and she sent me these. So, take the vocals, out and work on structure, or is the structure cool in ur opinion? Do u have any advice how to fix the firefight?
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17-11-2006 19:40 |
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Originally posted by iKoN aka Philthy
This is that track, I had u listen to cynik but with a way different intro. I just asked for some deep sounding vocals from her, and she sent me these. So, take the vocals, out and work on structure, or is the structure cool in ur opinion? Do u have any advice how to fix the firefight? |
as munki said, dump em or try to find one phrase or line and use that,
try vocoding too, it can get spectacular results plus you can repitch with it
as for the firefight, my drill as with any dirty loop / drums:
separate kicks, snares, highhats and eq each section indepentently, constantly palying solo and with the rest of the track
notch / boost / compress. you can really thin them out and compress using that NYC technique
_edit: you got three stars out of five. which means its above mediocre
my vote: 2/5 in current state. do something about those vocals and clean it up and it can climb
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 17-11-2006 19:52.
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17-11-2006 19:48 |
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revew in the works.
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18-11-2006 07:39 |
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gon try an hit u up with a review this weekend ; busy busy busy , so busy
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18-11-2006 13:37 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by equipped
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--->Vocal's sound ten times better than in "Dirty Dirty Jungle" tune,......actually very well done,..they forshure are out of key at part's,...well most of it is out of key,. but it kinda work's at parts id say,...but id still forshure mess with a few different key's to see how they all sound compared,..cause at part's it's off,....intro is beuty,....diggin the dirty synth,...id play with just that synth for some more bars before vocal drop's,,...the mix is the only thing thats hurtn id say,..don't eq overal mix element's unless you reallly really have too,....the best eq in most cases is volume"<----a wee tid bit,.....it's helped me allot,...anypoo...real nice tune overall,...great ideas,...no doubt amazing production,..ten times better than i was at learnin the shit,...cheers Ikon.
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19-11-2006 05:21 |
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Originally posted by equipped
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Originally posted by equipped
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--->Vocal's sound ten times better than in "Dirty Dirty Jungle" tune,......actually very well done,..they forshure are out of key at part's,...well most of it is out of key,. but it kinda work's at parts id say,...but id still forshure mess with a few different key's to see how they all sound compared,..cause at part's it's off,....intro is beuty,....diggin the dirty synth,...id play with just that synth for some more bars before vocal drop's,,...the mix is the only thing thats hurtn id say,..don't eq overal mix element's unless you reallly really have too,....the best eq in most cases is volume"<----a wee tid bit,.....it's helped me allot,...anypoo...real nice tune overall,...great ideas,...no doubt amazing production,..ten times better than i was at learnin the shit,...cheers Ikon. |
Thanks for checking it~ im gonna fug with it somemore and see where it goes, I have already taken parts of the vocals out, and i am attempting to set everything to the same key/note to see how it flows. I noticed that some sections of the breaks are off key as well. I will repost when I fix all the lil shit, and see whats up!
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19-11-2006 05:43 |
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the tempo is pretty slow
the intro synthy sounds n the vocal are cool
the drums could probably be cleaned up a bit
the bassline is pretty cool.
cool ideas, it has potential, just needs some cleaning up
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21-11-2006 05:31 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by anf0 D
the tempo is pretty slow
the intro synthy sounds n the vocal are cool
the drums could probably be cleaned up a bit
the bassline is pretty cool.
cool ideas, it has potential, just needs some cleaning up |
Yeah it is way to slow the more i listen, but it kind of sucks because when I goto speed it up, it throws certain things off, so I am in the process of cleaning those things up to see how it flows. I also took out most of the vocals, just left some background essence to add some flavor. But thanks for checking it
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