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Mothman Mothman is a male
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Hi all... im new here and uh... pretty much all i can say...
I was listening to the tracks you guys make and i like them a lot...
So i decided to post the track i made... however, do take prior notice that im pretty unexperienced in music making, and therefore you probably wont like my piece... but its the best thing ive done so far...

I made it on FL Studio and retouched the drums a bit with Acoustica MP3 Audio Mixer... Ive been fiddling with FL for maybe a year or so, but i havent paid much attention to it...

so, here it is: http://www.hot.ee/buhmob/volnat.mp3

PS. Im very sorry if spelled something wrong... where i come from we dont speak much english...

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15-11-2006 18:46
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Ok checking it now. The intro has a very mellow sad vibe, i like. Now the drop, that break is pretty intense for not really messing with DnB. The bass needs work for the tune to feel right though, and maybe layer some kicks onto the break. Instead of having the ending you have now as an ending, make it the breakdown to the 2nd drop, and then throw all your elements together, and add a few more, and it will flow better imo. Other than those things definetly has potential. RespeKt

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15-11-2006 18:58 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
Mothman Mothman is a male
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yeah, the bass needs work... ive got no idea, what kind of a bassline would fit here... something more crusty or something sub-bassy?

about the ending... by putting it to the centre, do you mean turning it into the main part of the song and therfore drumandbassy?

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15-11-2006 22:34
anf0 D anf0 D is a male
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the intro is nice and interesting... the sounds fit well together.
when it does i drop i felt a bit disappointed because it wasnt an epic huge drop, which i was expecting from the nice intro. the drums need more power and so does the bass... try using some distortion on the bass... and ask ik0n said, try layering your drums with some more harder hitting drums. dunno though, thats just my idea for a "harder" sorta tune.
keep workin it.

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16-11-2006 02:24 Homepage of anf0 D
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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yeah, the bass needs work... ive got no idea, what kind of a bassline would fit here... something more crusty or something sub-bassy?

about the ending... by putting it to the centre, do you mean turning it into the main part of the song and therfore drumandbassy?


It will make your track longer, and it will also give it more than one drop, which most DnB tunes have.

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16-11-2006 05:27 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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what the heck is "layering the drums"?

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29-11-2006 16:12
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