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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Track made with FL 5 and Acid Pro 5
Mastering done in wave lab...
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15-11-2006 18:31 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Nice to see a track from u. Not bad, but definetly needs alot of work. Not sound wise, but stucture and what not. The fill before the drop is pretty lame imo, it either needs to not be there, or something way nastier for it to bring in the noize. Good track once it drops, but not really awhole lot going on different in the 2nd lil drop except for the glitch and what not, sounds like dblgltich in full effect 
But I must say this at 2:52-2:55 there needs to be way more of that, that shit was riddin, got me bopping for a sec. just a suggestion, once the damn sample comes in drop that again and add some elements once it builds back up, and you will definetly have a slammin ending. Other than that, I dug it, just needs work....oh yeah also, take out the hi hat at the complete ending because its silent for a few seconds and then this random hat comes out of nowhere. RespeKt
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15-11-2006 19:10 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by iKoN aka Philthy
Nice to see a track from u. Not bad, but definetly needs alot of work. Not sound wise, but stucture and what not. The fill before the drop is pretty lame imo, it either needs to not be there, or something way nastier for it to bring in the noize. Good track once it drops, but not really awhole lot going on different in the 2nd lil drop except for the glitch and what not, sounds like dblgltich in full effect
But I must say this at 2:52-2:55 there needs to be way more of that, that shit was riddin, got me bopping for a sec. just a suggestion, once the damn sample comes in drop that again and add some elements once it builds back up, and you will definetly have a slammin ending. Other than that, I dug it, just needs work....oh yeah also, take out the hi hat at the complete ending because its silent for a few seconds and then this random hat comes out of nowhere. RespeKt |
yup not a finished version... but im nto going for drill core... so the edits are already extensive if yo ask me... suppose to be a basic roller.. othing more 
cheers for teh reivew...again all words welcome
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15-11-2006 19:15 |
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anf0 D
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16-11-2006 01:38 |
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cynik
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16-11-2006 07:22 |
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anf0 D
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16-11-2006 08:00 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by anf0 D
Sorry, the free service is at full capacity
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I'll aim it to you this afternoon if you still can't get it. IMO deff worth chekin out..
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16-11-2006 09:02 |
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anf0 D
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fkn quality
drum programming is sik, phatty basslines
the intro was heaps sweet, nice use of effects.
mix down is tight as.
finish it n let me play it out
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16-11-2006 09:26 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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17-11-2006 04:53 |
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equipped
tired
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17-11-2006 08:34 |
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Qel-Droma
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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NICE... i like the diversity. work on the intro... not bad just seems to have an empty spot. iKon pretty much summed it up, i agree with the ending hi hat 86 it... other than that you've got the makings of a great track!!!
rEspEkt
john
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17-11-2006 18:48 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by Qel-Droma
NICE... i like the diversity. work on the intro... not bad just seems to have an empty spot. iKon pretty much summed it up, i agree with the ending hi hat 86 it... other than that you've got the makings of a great track!!!
rEspEkt
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ya know... the hat is actually a crash which you both failed to mention.. and its obviously not done guys lol...
cheers for the words though!
any other takers?
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17-11-2006 19:16 |
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@1$-)
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i like the reverb on your bass.
lmao.
sorry i couldnt resist.
seriously though,
dark atmos.
cool old skool style stabs.
heavy square/saw stab is nice
beats are tight as usual, some nice glitchyness later on. i think maybe it needs some more percussion.
all good though. maybe a little more low end sub wise
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17-11-2006 19:22 |
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equipped
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absolute beuty mix,..love that flang you put on yer break's,...fuckin classic!,...What are you usin for that?,..heafty skill with the intro background noises,..add's to the tension big time 
,.. mix at-->2:22 sounds like pure perfection on this end,....lovin that metalic sound at->2:43,....forshure a nice addition,.....overall top notch production id say Surora 23,..no doubt this a heafty tune,....look foward to finished product,..your production is sick,..cheers.
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18-11-2006 05:54 |
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